I have read this story a few times and always love it but I came across something the other day. It says that knuckles would never lose an arm wrestle, in fact he could stop a moving truck. It was on the sonic wiki it says he was designed to be able to lift 100 tonnes and was so strong he could crack hydrogen atoms out of the air, wow.

-he strained him mind back to try and remember something, -

instead of him mind did you mean his mind? I could be wrong,This is an awesome story so far and has challenged my vocabulary so I could be wrong,You have such a vivid way of putting things that makes it so fun to read, hopefullly one day I can become as good as you, I'm also glad you use Fang (a.k.a Nack in review you asked why he has two names nack is his real name the one he uses around friends/allies where as fang is his name given to him by other bounty hunters so after murder they only know 'fang' killed them and proballly don't know nack IS the same that clears things up.

Love it

Im so glad i started to read this story!

I really liked this one. Just thought you should know. ;)

I haven't read this story in so long...just past two years since I read it beginning to end last, I believe 3 It was and still is my favorite Sonic fanfiction of all time. I need to get off my lazy butt and read the sequels.

Also, loved the characterization, no one has every captured them so aptly in my eyes. I like how you bring out Shadow's friendlier side. I also like Nack's characterization in this story, which must have either been ridiculously easy or extremely hard, since he was only ever in two games.

Anyways, this thing needs more comments. Must get friends to read. 3 Ciao.

great story and all but i have a few small complaints-

1. how come shadow is laid out so easy, does he not remember his training or is there something wrong with him?

cant use Chaos Spear only sonic wind

3.i dont think that shadow was a sociable person even before Marias death, he wouldnt hang around and joke about with them and at times he seems to go from serious normal shadow into weird too-like-sonic-shadow. i know hes got amnesia and all but still.

these complaints dont mean squat of course and im looking forward to the reading the rest of the series i think its got great potential but im picky when it comes to Shadows personality and it sometimes irritates me through an entire story.

This storyline is probably the most interesting and and intricate that I have ever read. I also liked the KnuxRouge parts.

I like this story alot because it makes me entertained and it makes me think!

Very cool! This fic was awesome! A very few grammatical issues here and there, but still very well written. You did an excellent job of portraying the characters, especially the interactions between Knuckles and Rouge. Though personally I think Shadow should be a bit darker... I guess hanging around Sonic lightened him up a bit. XP Seraph (or Seraph Jr.?) was quite the unique character. When you first introduced snippets of his thoughts, I figured he was some assassin robot built by Eggman. In a metaphorical sense, I guess he was. I look forward to seeing him in future fics. _

You know, somehow I KNEW the doc was behind the Guild! It made perfect sense, really.

Seraph's workin' for someone? Who?

And since when can Sonic use CHaos Spear? His technique is Sonic WInd.

Jesus, this guy's freaky. Is he a robot or something?

The GUild of Treasure HUnters. Makes me think of the League of Extraordinary Gentlemen.

Once more, I ask: who the hell is this guy?

Oy, what is this guy?

Why don't they just move the island? Can't it fly anywhere?