Hirokata is freaking Ninja, you moron! WTF was he doing there? ninja stays at home base unless they have a mission

This is an interesting story so far. Holly is a good addition to the clan.
On a sadder note. I can relate to having a miscarriage. My niece was pregnant with her
second child when it's heart beat just stopped. The pain they have experienced is depicted quite
well here.

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This is amazing I love it so much! I'm just curious how far are you going in the story. You got yourself a new follower

Great story! :)

its been longer than forever! waiting patiently does not come easy to me!

what's up with the actualization?

I love it.

Some of it I didn't like, but you made a comeback with the ending! Holly and Jacob: way to go, dude!

Dear writer,

I really like your story! Although, I wish you'd given more detail during the part as of when Kim gave birth. I'm not trying to put u down or anything. On the contrary, I'm writing a Kp/Rs story right now. Keep writing K/R ship stories!

where have you been? i've missed you so much! you need to update more please!loved this chapter...love them all!it's kinda sad, but still good. please UP-DATE SOON!

it was short. but I liked it. it was cute. I can't wait for the wedding. update soon

-Miya

Nice wedding,kind of a shame to ignore Ron's Jewish heritage but it was a nice wedding all the same.

Bubba

Aw naming kids already, that's cute, Bonnie is cool and well written as well. Good story.

Bubba

well, at lease kim isn't getting worst. good job