I know it's been more than 10 years since you wrote this story, but I have to say it's truly beautiful. It's so well-written that I could easily picture all the characters in these situations. I believe that if all of them stay in character and you can actually feel them, then it's undoubtedly the great story. It became one of my faves and thank you so much wonderful person for writing it!

Ed could be around the corner! *checks around the corner* Dammit! No Ed!

Great story I loved it!

aww soooo beautiful. lovedthis story soo much. nice ending. oneof my favs. keep writing. ur doing great.

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It's so sad... And if you keep the film and how it ends... T_T

love it

That was beautiful. Thank you for writing it.

I am not scared 2 say that this one of my favorite stories i've read. i can not wait to read ur other stories.

I really liked this story.

I can relate to it a bit. My little brother was born with the cord around his neck. He's fine, and adorable. And I call him my little Alphones Elric because he looks just like Al when he was 7ish too. But he acts like a dog... scary. Lol!

Well, I really liked this story. I never really did like the ending for the FMA movie. I always wanted Ed to go back and spend the rest of his life in the place that he had grown up in. I wanted him to go back, with Al, and live with Roy, and Riza, and Pinako and Winry. I never wanted him to stay here, in our world. Thats just my veiws on the FMA movie. If you dont agree, thats fine with me.

Again, great job with this story!

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I like it so far.

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I'll read the rest later

This story is so good i love the pairinh of Ed and Winry so much i cant wait until i finish readin the whole thing

Just roamed trough all of this fic in one go, and even tho it has been here for a VERY long time, i still thought i review.

*SQUEE* OMG this was F*A*N*T*A*S*T*I*C. It was absolutely brilliant i love you ! :D this was ...wow...just wow. The link to this fic should be next to the explanation of a perfect story. You are simply amazing, this is beyound my abilities to describe, it was simply beautiful.

It was sweet/sad/angsty/flyffy and everything one can want. I even almost shed a few tears at one point - and believe me that is not something that happens more often than once in a blue moon. I never even shed a tear when my grandmother died, and she was rather close to me.

You are simply amazing writer, this is beyound perfection. I will be sure to check out your other fics later, but damn - you seem more like a proffesional writer than anything else. Thank you so much for taking your time to write this beautiful piece of art.

wow. you should write a book and get it published

awesome. loved it. will rave forever to all my FMA fan friends about it. please, for the sake of all the ed & winry fans out there, do NOT stop writing

Just checked chapter one out; very good description of Ed and Winry's emotions. They've been dancing around each other for so long... I put this on my favorite stories list so I can go back and finish reading it when I have more time to enjoy it. Pinako is probably over the moon.

that was so good it almost made me cry

can you HEAR the sniffles

i hope you write another sequel to this because i read Illegitimate Child?

sorry forgot the title (read it an hour ago but forgot the title)

roll your eyes, its ok

lol

anyway...

write more stories really soon and if you do e-mail the titles to me

ps sorry for the randomness