I can't stay long, but I would like to say that I really enjoyed what there is of this story, and I would love to see it finished. Please? Very well done plotline, charecterization, development, and pretty much everything in here, including humor, which I greatly enjoyed. The best authors have humor as well as everything else in their stories. (Hopefully) update soon and keep writing!

I wassnt finished with my last review. Anyway, can you please update? I know you may have a family or you are a serious adult or you may have cancer (I hope the last one is false) but can you please update? I would forever be grateful for this

Last time you updated I was 5 years old. I have read this story and I like it a lot.

Another 6 years. I do not believe that youll pick up this story again, sadly, but thank you for a good journey in which you have taken me in so far

Wow. Not bad at all. I trust you not to try and take on more than you can chew. Personally, it's a lot to keep track of as a writer. It's not overwhelming to a reader, so you're doing great there. there's some weird plot places. The time skips aren't helping. I know that events move slowly, but to a reader it feels almost like you're denying us part of the story. maybe if you get the inspiration, write a chapter of more what happened during General Li's absence. The characterization is solid, as well as the plot so far. I don't see any mistakes. Wonderful job, now only if you could update... :)
Take as much time as you need, we'll be patient.

This story is fabulous! Please finish it! You can't just leave us hanging like that! We gotta know how it ends and we defiantly need more Mulan and Shang love! One little kiss is not enough! XD

yo! this story is awesome:)
could you beta my story?:)
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pm me?
reply asap if possible:D

great story but um there's a part that doesn't make a whole lot of sense due to the phrasing or grammer in this chapter here's the qoute

"If we both of our signals were crossed about the attack," there's more but it makes sense sorry if you didn't mean to say that but um that's what i am seeing

This is pretty good :) Although I was disappointed at the end of this chapter, cause then I realized that this was the last chapter :( Update soon please, it's nice to read something with an actually interesting and unique plot

This is seriously one of the most well-written Mulan fics that I've come across. The plot is exciting and the characterisations (based on the first movie) are near perfect. If this fic is still being continued, I'm looking forward to reading the end. :)

Ya... update. Like, now. Cause I want to finally find a copleted story here,, and I am wondering if they even exist... I really like this Sory!

PLEASE TELL US THAT YOU'RE WRITING MORE!

I really enjoy this story it is really good. please write more

The fact that you already returned to this story after a 6 year break, gives me hope that you will really finish this amazing story.

I really enjoyed reading this! Please keep writing! Some one can actually write- yay! The pacing is pretty good but the characterisations aren't deep enough for me (but I get picky about that sort of thing!) There is a lot of good action and warfare but you can't go wrong with a bit more romance ;). PLease keep writing!