You've done a fantastic job on this story. I love it!

YES. YES YES YES YES! this is EXACTLY what i have been waiting for. this is perfect. genius. inspired! i love you so much for this story. i laughed, i 'aw'ed, i almost cried... that is the mark of a true professional. thank you for making my week )

“Right. I’m sure there won’t be any bone jumping, sir. Your father runs a tight ship.”

You. Are. Amazing. This just made my week.

your an awesome writerand these possibility stories rule

tigh and kara... urk

Very well done!

I love the balance in your stories, as well as the complexity and interesting world-building. I'm a world-builder at heard, so love reading long and involved stories centering on "What If?"

This story was just amazing. So well written, and such an interesting and great plot opportunity to explore. You poured so much emotion into the piece, but still managed to keep some parts of it light, and it was a thoroughly enjoyable read. Great job! :-

:sigh:

That was one of the fluffiest, happiest, sweetest, (and every other cutsy word I can think of) story I have read.

I loved the plot, it was so funny to read. Crashdown was HILARIOUS! That was so cute the way he kept going after Cally.

And the last couple chapters with Lee and Kara were adorable and very well written. I always thought that something would happen to Kara and she would just breakdown like that. I think that it seemed very real and you did a great job expressing the emotion.

Well, good job and I will be backtracking to read some of your past stories and I really hope to see you continue writing in the future.

I love how you are giving the characters background, as harsh as this chapter was.

Anyway, I am really enjoying this story!

I love this story, almost made me cry a few times! And I just love the last sentece, it so fits Kara, and I'm happy that everything went well in the end :D

And Cally and Crash were so cute too, as well as Hot Dog and his 'suffering'

It's just amazing how you fit so many differnt aspects in one story and everything plays out in the end!

I love it. The plot is amazing and the constant twists of fate are perfectly written and timed. The ending couldn't be better. You're an amazing author and the story is brilliant. Well done.

Awesome. The emotion was so raw - I felt like I was right there with the characters, experiencing every sorrow with them. Beautiful story, you can count me as a fan.

That was so deeply amazing that I can hardly find teh words to tell you. It's just... perfect.

Brilliant!

What a wonderful story. I love the happy ending, (and the torturous meanderings to get there).

You rock!

LOL I love that this sad story had a happy ending.