amazing!

I love this so much. The eloquence the descriptions the feelings it was all so brilliant. I couldn't get enough it was so sweet. This is the best kakairu fanfic I've ever read. Wonderful work.

haha genius. your knowledge of their behavior is so perfect

Your story is very sensitive and compelling. I really feel their struggles. Good job

thats was touching. a few grammar mistakes and typos, but once you edit those out it is very well done and cute

Cute!

I just... I simply loved it. Thank you for producing such an amazing story. I loved a lot of things about this story. It kept me curious and while the URST was hot and the feelings were cathartic and charging and literally made my toes curl.

Simply beautiful with touching scenes, nice emphasis and simplicity turned into the ultimate sophistication. The beautiful beginning of Kakashi and Iruka (even though it breaks my heart since I'm Kakashi's die-hard fan)

I loved it. Thank you for sharing such an amazing fic with us viewers :)

absolutely adored this story-lovely progression-sweet without being saccharin-i loved the realization of the attraction and more between the two-it felt honest

re read it still like it

Aww..such a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Hi I loooooooove your fiction :D So cute, well done

I am immensely glad you added that final chapter! That definitely made the story ten times more intimate and complete, both emotionally and physically. Things that made me laugh: The fact Iruka was still reading that book, Iruka attempting to translate Hayate's "encrypted kanji", and the idea of the Sadaime giving Iruka "the talk". Things that moved me (so many!): Kakashi's overwhelming desire to be acknowledged by Iruka, Kakashi recreating Iruka's ribbon memory and Iruka reciprocating with his father's shuriken (and tongue ;p), the grand dinners -especially the one at Sasuke's, the vulnerable moments between the boys and Iruka, Kakashi respecting Iruka's boundaries and enraptured by everything Iruka...from beginning to end I was captivated. It makes me wish for that kind of relationship! What needs a little work are the transition scenes, where your writing style tends to slip in tense and some unintentional word flubs occurred, which surprised me because the moments that were really poignant were perfectly worded and eloquently used to portray the characters' intended intentions. A stickler for grammar, even I could overlook all of that because your characters and story concept was so compelling. I loved every minute of it and was almost sad to see it end. Thank you for sharing; can't wait to read more of your work!

This was beautiful! :)

Love this! These two were the cutest I've ever read! I squealed like a crazed fan-girl the whole time! Beautiful!

Oh my god! It's one of the best fic I've read... so sweet and intense at the same time... and the psychologic analysis if the feeling is so well done! Thank you so much ;)