That was beautiful, I know that fear of not wanting to open up your heart to anyone, or anything. I feel it know, but then I realize I have people who'll be there for me. Why is it that you keep nailing what I'm feeling? Sorry, it must seem weird for some stranger to come and say this. Thanks.

~ToaoK

I have to thank you, I haven't had a good day at all today. Infact, a friend of mine and I were having a similar conversation. Thanks for bringing some light into my day, even if it was a little.

~ToaoK

I reread this and chapter 4. I love them so much. I think you should continue this one and maybe even make it it's own story. Awesome job!

-D101

I couldn't review for the last chapter so I'll do it here.

Poor Kaori. It was a really sweet chapter though.

And now here is the review for this chapter.

It could relate to YYH. For some reason I can see Kurama writing this and the pairing being KuramaXKaori. But it also could be HieiX... I think her name was Kyo...? So yeah. It does relate. Awesome job! I hope you write some more soon! If not, see ya!

-D101

So cute and about time for these two. Awesome job!

-D101

So cute. Awesome job!

-D101

Hey there! Wonderful one. I loved it, it was just so sweet. Write more soon.

it was good, that's all you get. What more do you want woman! it was a little sad. and that's all. i guess you can still write more, just nothing too sad, no tear-jerkers(it means something that makes you cry)! And never again torment Hiei again! Got it?

AMAZING! Beautifuly written, so sad and sweet and I THINK I AM GOING TO CRY! WONDERFULL WORK!

Omg! This story is SO good! I'm so sensative, I felt like I wanted to cry... This story is WONDERFUL. Simply wonderful. .

How sweet and sad! I love it!

Wow what a sweet one-shot! I loved it, really beautiful work.