| Reviews for Broken Dreams |
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  EstelKid chapter 11 . 4/18/2006 Are you going to finish this? Your story is great! Please continue! ~EstelKid |
 KateLilly chapter 11 . 11/14/2005 O...M...G... THAT WAS SO FREAKIN' AWSOME! I MUST HEAR MORE! GO ON! |
| EvilspyAchacia chapter 11 . 6/26/2005 another awsome chapter. congradulations! |
| abcdefghijklmnop7 chapter 11 . 6/19/2005 damn, this is so good! keep it up! this is one of the best fanfics i've ever read. |
| October Sky chapter 11 . 6/19/2005 Ah! The 'enemies'(God I can't spell) have it worse than the others! Hope you don't kill off anyone, especially Jack..and I hope Sayid doesn't go too crazy when he finds them..if he finds them. |
| lostgirl2 chapter 11 . 6/19/2005 Oh my Gosh! I can't stand the suspense! yet another great chapter! good job! |
| Hekate-Trivia chapter 11 . 6/19/2005 oh... my... god... i read this to my sister and the both of us were clinging to ourselves and like scared to death... good job i don't this to happen, obviously, that would be bad... very bad... one think i noticed about this story, however, there are several spelling mistakes, and spaces missing, letters missing, and wrong tenses, and many error all together... there were times i had to skip words while reading because i couldn't figure out what it was supposed to say. may i suggest some editing? i really love this story, the premise is awesome, and it scared the crap out of me... we finished reading thsi chapter and my sister looked at the bottom and was like "crap... there's no more" awesome story, really |
| Hekate-Trivia chapter 1 . 6/19/2005 wow *stares in awe at the screen* i love the beginning |
| mone chapter 11 . 6/19/2005 Another great chapter. I think...Like I told you my mind's slow...in twenty minutes or so I'll understand what happened...WAIT! Jack's not dead, is he? Heh...update soon! |
| mone chapter 10 . 6/16/2005 hey another great chapter...really good again! So...keep updating! And I will give you a present. Or cookies, or maybe i could combine the two and give you a cookie as a present! Anyway keep updating! |
| Natalie chapter 10 . 6/12/2005 NO! Not a cliffhanger! gr! Great story-very CREEPY! I LOVE IT! |
| abcdefghijklmnop7 chapter 10 . 6/11/2005 This chapter was awesome! I love it! Please update as soon as you can! |
| October Sky chapter 10 . 6/11/2005 I was right! No memories! I just hope that they don't kill them when they go back to camp..great chapter, glad you updated! |
| I Luv Captain Terror chapter 10 . 6/11/2005 WOW! Are they better now? |
| EvilspyAchacia chapter 10 . 6/11/2005 another kickass chapter. |
