this is good i hope you have more coming

More chapters pretty please with Ramen on top XD

Omg its to cute!

Please more :)

i like the story. i don't know why but i feel like ..hmm your writing style is just.. interesting.i guess that's the word i'm looking for its a style that keeps your interest and makes you want to read more and draws you into the story and you get lost... i really like it keep up the good work i look forward to reading more

Where are you!? I know I'm being selfish ._. But why aren't you updating !? I have waited long enough...well actualy this is my first time reading this and I love it! Please update and don't give up on this story. I need you Author San ...I mean I don't need you as in physically cause that be wierd since this is my first time reviewing ,but I need you ...to update :)

Sincerely, Selfish girl who still waits for an update.

dis is so good.
updateee please.

Please update!

i soo love your story! i didnt stop reading it! i find the story well-written!XD
so pleasee UPDATE!

MOREE!

UPDATE!

:O please update soon!

omg omg omg a bad omen! and how long has it been already . dun ask how i found this at the little corner of all the fanfics LOL XD 3

Ummmm, so I've read this story before-and I think it's absolutely BRILLIANT. As in, like, AMAZING. I was astounded.

However (and believe me when I say I feel SOOOO bad for saying this), I passed over it a few times when I first initially saw the summary. Not because it didn't look interesting, but because of the bad grammar in the summary.

(Sorry, sorry, sorry, SORRY!)

Umm, so I just wanted to say that-maybe, possibly, TOTALLY your own choice to change this or not-if you wanted, you could possibly change the summary to something like this(?):

"Get your hands off him little brother." "He's mine! I own him," Itachi snarled. "Over my dead body, Itachi!" A sinister smile spread across Itachi's lips. "As you wish." ItaNaruSasu.

I'm REALLY, REALLY sorry for critiquing this, especially because I feel so mean, and I KNOW that I must sound SUPER rude...

But really, it's such a wonderful story, and I think that (MAYBE, I'm obviously NOT sure) some people might overlook it for the bad grammer (MAYBE)? So, I thought, why not try to help a little bit by giving a suggestion? So I really, REALLY hope you don't take this the wrong way-especially because I feel so bad :(

Sorry for bothering (maybe). And realize that I REALLY DO LOVE THIS STORY, it was amazing! I hope you update someday :)

-LuckyTurtle-

great story so far. i hope that you will update really soon. bye!

interesting