ok ii'm really srry.. but ii didn't understand this at all. IT was either the grammer or the use of words, but it didn't make anysense. I understood what the point of the story was and liked the plot, but ii didn't understand the words at all

'He sits by her grave and refuses to say goodbye. He calls her Mudblood and is not surprised when other visitors take offense.'

I love the anger and the pain that's portrayed in this piece and I love the above lines.

The fic was beautifully written and heart-breaking *thumbs up*!

I still can't figure out who it is. It can't be Snape because the person is a year younger than Lily, and Snape was in the same year. That also rules out Lupin and Pettigrew. Is he maybe an OC?

Interesting, is it Snape? This piece is intriguing and leaves a lot of questions but it is very artfully done. I like it

interesting... weird but I still liked it... interesting.