Reviews for Progeny |
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![]() ![]() I cannot believe I read this dribble. |
![]() ![]() All these kids are overwhelming me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Crazy world u made. |
![]() ![]() ![]() An immense, powerful ending. Fantastic ' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there! Just wanted to say I have read a few of your fics (Crushed and its sequal as well as this one) and really love them. :) I hope the original you're working on goes well. Happy writing! Take care, Aonadharcach |
![]() ![]() wow! that was very good, shifting POVs interesting, but in the end, a very sad bittersweet story(which is good *sniff sniff*) keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story very much. My only objection is that you never got into the issues (beyond immortality) that could have arisen from Buffy being a robot. She may have a human soul, but her body is a machine. What if it malfunctioned? Didn't she have problems at first as she adjusted to recharging at night? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I loved that a fabulous ending, very tounching, keep up the writing, AJ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent, bittersweet ending to this entertaining story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now that's a sad ending there, but a good one. However long your hiatus may last, I'm looking forward to reading some more. Normally this is where I say, "I'm looking forward to the next chapter." In leiu of that, I look forward to your next story. Good luck, Savage. -Zeke |
![]() ![]() ![]() very sad ending, but a great story! i enjoyed it very much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad but lovely ending. I especially liked the line about 50 years of happiness being less than a feather to the mountain of eternity. Hope your 750 word original piece goes well. We'll be waiting for you when you come back. This was really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I loved the ending, very funny. Also I apologize for my last, highly caffienated review. :P Cant wait to see any new stuff. |
![]() ![]() I have to say, I am really enjoying your work. keep writing, and don't let your new partner influence you too much. stay true to your art. |