Revan mostly seems like an emo bitch, and not a particularly bright one to boot.

It's a bit too melodramatic for my taste, and you've made the mistake of not yet building up Revan for the reader so that they would actually care about his anguish and loss.

This is one-sided

You are really well known for not continuing your series at the best part.

Really who have those two beat him when others can take those two out. They didn't try to take over when Malek became a Sith lord. And revan is stronger than him.

It's a shame you never got to finish this story. Like most of the other's it's well written and you left off on the worst cliffhanger possible. UGH

great work

This is some good shit keep it up please

...this bullshit is why I hate Bastilla. I took great pleasure in gutting that bitch in EVERY single one of my 314 playthroughs of Kotor1.

Wookie Mortal Kombat!

Big Z, Zalbarr vs Hanharr. Both are exiled mad claws. Zalbarr for trying to gut his traitorous little brother who had become a slaver, and Hanharr cause he figured I am a badass Wookie who can rip arms off and beat people to death with their own fists, so I think I will.

Please tell me these two do battle.

Also RevanxMission all the way. I ship it!

Atris. The white bitch.

The only person everyone wants dead. All the other Jedi Masters have fan clubs. But Atris. The galaxy is better off without her. Narrow minded bigoted prejudice fool.

Waiting for an update

Supposed to have been posted 22 July 2012, at and the Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. My computer went down again in June of 2012 with a virus. Then in late November kotorfanmedia went down for reasons unknown, so I was stymied in my attempts to post the reviews. I had waited for it to revive, but you on deserve your reviews.

Alternate Universe Pre KOTOR: What if not only the Jedi, but Malak failed?

The piece had some interesting moments in it Defeating the Jedi attack at the same moment that he's dealing with Malak's treachery, then using the same power supposedly within the Exile to turn the Jedi he has captured.

Fourteen chapters to date, but I only had time to read the one.

I guess a six year old fic is hardly expected to reawaken, yet still it would be rather nice. I would not mind an update.

I really do like your story especially your mention to order 66 and anikans fall to the darkside but really this story is great and you should continue it