This is very good. You are an excellent author and you are very good at describing. I could see the story in my head easily, which is a sign of an excellent author.

NO! YOU CANT KILL JACK! HOW DARE YOU! great fic though! i'm just gonna assume that everyone THOUGHT he was dead, but he somehow miraculously survived, because Captain Jack Sparrow just can't die.

Wow major tear jerker. Great story.

so sad...but beautifully written.

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such a bitter sweet story!

i loved it!

Depressing ending, but still a wonderful oneshot. D

Oh my 've broken my 's sad,bat extremely beautiful.

Good,but so sad.;_;

Aww! That's SO good! Almost made me cry!

So anti-Jack and Elizabeth.

Beautiful. 'nuff said

beautiful, enough said

That was so good! But so sad... *sticks out bottom lip*

So sad..

Really odd that you should post this fic so soon after I have just watched Pirates again and I was thinking for the first time really wathing it abut Elizabeth and Jacks relationship in the film. Those scenes (including the deleted ones why were they not put in!) on the island are my favourites from the film.

Your writing as always is beautiful.