Whoa... That was kinda creepy... your GOOD!...

Great story

This story is amazing! I couldn’t stop reading, I hardly noticed the chapters fly by!

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You are a wonderful writer! This is a perfect example of why Fan Fiction is so popular. Except, your story is way over the top as far as extremely well done is concerned.

Watching a show as interesting as Numb3ers makes us all want just that much more from the characters and their lives. But, as human beings, we can only observe others - we do not know what is truly going on in another person's mind unless that person actually, and truthfully, tells us. In the real world, we generally get insight into other people's minds by reading. In this story, I feel as if I have been inside Don and Charlie's minds and learned more about what makes them unique. Ywe, this is just make believe, but it has given true form and dimension to these characters.

That was good. Thank u

This is Briliant. Really you got the character's personality down to a T. I also love the story line the plot and the emotions seem so real..

Wow, you put in a lot of information in this story. I learned quite a bit. :) . I really enjoyed reading this.

I greatly enjoyed this. Very well done.

Very interesting story. In general, it was very well written and the characterizations perfect. My one quibble is the sudden shift to present tense in the last two chapters. As you had consistently (and correctly) written the previous chapters in past tense, this switch was confusing. Unless you are aiming for a particular affect, all story narratives should be written in past tense and you should not change tense in mid-story.

Thanks for the interesting read, Beth

Ah, the dangers of Psych 101: students start diagnosing everyone around them with everything and anything so long as its extreme.

I really liked the characterizations in this story and it's flow. Very well done I thought.

Nice story! I have one complaint though. Near the end of the story, the last two or three chapters seemed different. It was like someone else had picked up the story. You were doing great keeping the story in the correct tense, and then in the last chapters you switched to present tense.

Your grammar got a little crazy and I found myself having to read the story in the correct tense so it wouldn't aggravate me.

Here is the last line of the story as an example: "Yeah," Charlie smiles, seeing right through Don's confusion" You wrote smiles, and it should be smiled. Charlie smiled, seeing right through Don's confusion. It feels more natural reading it that way.

That is where my confusion with this story lies, you wrote it one way then changed it. Otherwise I thought this was a great story, very well researched and an interesting plot. At first I was worried that it was Charlie hearing the voices, like the old saying "there is a fine line between genius and insanity" )

Wow - you've impressed me with the technical aspects of this story but also with the way you've analysed and written the complexities of the characters. I found this a very thoughtful and thought-provoking piece. Thanks.

Ah, this is an excellent story. One of my very favorites. I think you captured the characters beautifully. I hope to see more stories from you!