This is a superb piece of story telling. Starts off slow but builds very nicely with great character development and realistic emotions along with great comic timing. Very well done.

Loved the story!

OMG is he gonna switch Alan's test for his?! Ahhh'!

Thank you for this amazing story! It was a pleasure to read from start to finish.

Wow this story was awesome! I've only really seen the thunderbird movie and this story was an awesome tribute to that! I love it! Thanks for spending so much time on it...with all the details you have it's easy to tell you worked hard and long on it so really, thanks! :)

Your fan,
KnightStrider49 :D

I enjoyed this story.

a good story, kind of long and took me some time to finish it but i kept coming back. thank you for writing it.

Brillant, absolutely brillant. I sat up for six hours reading this entire thing and I must admit that I am very impressed! You really had me at the edge of my seat a few times throughout the story and have an amazing ability to keep me interested.

yay! All's well that ends wonderfully, and what a ride it's been. Here's hoping that Fermat *will* finally learn about his mother, and that Sable the ambulance/hash-slinging girl does make it to operative status. She and Scott are a fun combination. Your stories are always a pleasure to read, El, and I look forward to the next exiting epic you have in store for us all. )

Christine

D: IT'S OVER, HOW WILL I LIVE.

*applause* Congratulations on finishing the most awesome Thunderbirds story, a whole 80 chapters, each starting with the prefix "Un-" (Took me ages to realise that)

But yes, it's awesome :)

One question, did A.J. find out about the Thunderbirds? Or are you not going to tell me and just write a sequel? *hint hint*

loved it! well done! really intriguing from the 1st chap! kept me hooked! is there gonna b a sequel?

Congratulations! What a wonderful story and a good ending. I well remember starting to read this story when you started and how pleased I was to see it progress...again well done!

I finally found the time to read the last couple of chapters and I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the story.

I loved this... The entire story was brilliant. I look forward to reading more of your work...

Loved this story! really really good! maybe there could be a sequal at all? love it:)