For so long I read it as an unfinished work. Reading the whole thing was wonderful. It was thoughtful emotional and insightful with so much love between a couple who r far from perfect. Thank you for completing it. Please keep on writing. I guess how a story ends matters a lot because now this is one of the best sshg stories I've read

Great story! I would have preferred a different ending but great nonetheless

What a fantastic story. I really like "your" Snape in here. The end was a little bittersweet, but absolutly perfect. Thanks for sharing 3

Amazing story. loved it!

This was a very interesting take on their relationship. I like how you went back on forth between past and present, and how you showed his growth over time. And the mystery element was well done. I was surprised you ended it the way you did with her memory, really wasn't expecting that. But it made it more real this way, and there is very much something in the idea wouldn't even question bringing her home. That's very Severus - not afraid of the difficulty, only terrified that she wouldn't love him.

Such a beautiful story!

What a bittersweet ending. Just a tiny bit disappointing about the memories, but otherwise its an incredibly beautiful story that captured me completely. I really liked it, thank you.

There is a beta remark left in:

"Our apartment this is a suggestion only - but I would change apartment to quarters or rooms is cluttered with her Muggle artifacts," he complained.

(I agree with the beta BTW!)

Hello! I'm not sure if you still read your comments but I love this love story between Severus and Hermione. Its so endearing and sweet that I have tears in my eyes. Thank you!

Beautifully written and such a good storyline. Thank you so much for sharing

An extremely sweet and well written story. The love between Severus and hermione feels right and natural, their characters are well respected and you didn't over exageretad situations or feelings.
The story in itself is worth reading and reviewing ;) I hope I'll read more from you !

A lovely but sad ending. I'd like to think that Severus is using his retirement to create a potion to help Hermione and is successful.

This is so Heartbreaking for Severus but I am hopeful with his thoughtful resolve.

that was sad but a good story

It's ready sad that she couldn't ever remember. He has to also deal with that all the time, but it's sweet that Snape stays.