I love your story so far, I like the humor in this chapter!

I LOVED THIS STORY! COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING! Except when Ashley died. :D

amazing!

:D

If you want to use these, here are some spelling and capitalization stuff.

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theirthere (when Pony says, "You can come over to our house and eat there."

Doesdoes (when Cole says, "Well, does Darry mind?"

If you want them, there you have them. Post if you want more at the beginning or end of your chapters.

this is a great story

did you write a seguel

it not you should

I love this story! i just read it twice and its just as good the second time! You are a great author!

AWESOME dont end it i dont know keep going but if you dont it was still a very awesome story.

thanks

Awsome I love it! Its really good, your a great writer.

Coolio, they're getting married. I so happy! Good job.

i really like this story. please update soon.

School really ruins things up doesnt it? Hope you will find time

AWESOME just keep the story and i shall review on every update so update.

THANKS.

AWSOME! Sad :( but good :) update soon!

AW

AWESOME upate love the new chapter so update soon AESOME story.

THANKS.