They are a great couple. The ending was sad. Nicely done.

Oh you butt-munch! You had me so hyped. :)

Yes! Definitely a sequel. I burst out laughing after I read the last sentence and realized this was a male fantasy! You should write one from Beverly's POV. Wait, would the holodeck be a male thing only? Would Beverly script something?

That was so cool. You should write a sequel to this.

OMG!

I never expected that from him!

I'm even quite sure he would not do it.

That said i like shocking stories :-)

Ciao!

Ok, that was different. I liked it though. You should make a sequel where he actually does it and see what happens.

:O OMG! I was not expecting that twist! Briliant, never would have thought of that! I loved it! Well written too. Kepp up the great work.