This is brilliant and a long time waiting! Thanks! I love Elliot and Oliva stories!

Deb

aw! Loved it! cute and fluffy. my fave was the part at the end when they put their hands over their hearts. so cute and fluffy. awesome story!

hey great ending i liked this story but it was a bit short you did a good job

I know you wrote 'end', but this has the potential to continue into a good E/O fic. I'm going to encourage you to continue. Sometimes, we write something short and then go back and decide to continue it. I've done it.

I don't normally review S.V.U stories because I tend to be disappointed towards the end of a story or chapter. But this one is really good. I can see Elliot feeling this way on a day to day basis, and trying so desperately not letting any one else see his pain. I like the fact that it was Olivia who help him through ... All though the paring kind of squeaks for me. You managed to pull this one off well.

i love this story it is so cute :) you should write a sequel

very nice. i liked it a lot.

*grins like a fool* A mildly happy ending for them, eh? I liked the last scene the best. :)

I really like this story. It's so believable.

I LOVED IT! Vey well written and true to character!

Aww! So cute!

~Carissa~

hi there, just want to encourage you to write more svu fics. i'll read them all. :)

I LOVED IT! It was amazing and very realistic. Good job.