This was amazing. Very dark, but amazing.

This was a very intense story. The hatred and simmering sadness could be felt in the way Hermione acted and talked. In her mocking descriptions of what was going on. her pain could be felt and understood and sympathized with. With all of it, there was the overall, yet hidden, deep yet blatantly obvious love shrouding the whole story and lying at its center. Very lovely story. Keep writing.

-wr63

Black Dresses by The Spill Canvas

Really brilliant story. A pure beauty, one of a kind... IO absolutely loved it... )

EXCELLENTLY WRITTEN STORY. VERY SAD BUT MADE YOU PONDER. WONDERFUL METAPHORS THROUGHOUT!

Wow.

I feel bad for Hermione, she seemed to think that she was the only one who cared. I'm guessing that Remus was narrating the story, a very good point of veiw for a funeral; also very original. I've never read any funeral scene that had that POV, but I think it's brilliant. You should definetly try writing professionaly, you'd do great.

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Kaus Boreails

That was wow. Everything, just wow. It was beautifully written. It truly was. It didn't make me cry though, just empty. It was weird. Happy and jumpy one moment, then...nothing. Job well done.

First off, I have greatly enjoyed reading your stories in the past. This one was another amazing accomplishment. The stream of consciousness flavor that you captured is one of my favorite writing styles. This reminded me of Faulkner's As I Lay Dying and Darl's attempts to save his dead mother from the hypocrisy of the other family members. If you haven't read it, you should! Its not very often that I am so moved by a story on this website. Thanks for the thought provoking read.

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Wow! That was tragic. So very depressing. However it was good. But sad...

i'm pretty sure the 'she' is Hermione. i can't figure out if the 'he' you keep talking about is Ron or Remus or Sirius, since you seem to favor those three with her. this is a beautifully written piece and gives off a desperate and moarnful tone, just as it should. i love it.

omg...cool...

Very Angsty, but very very good and well written! I don't exactly get WHY there were pretenders there and why Harry was being so strange, but it sort of fits ya know?

thats cool! )

Bleh. Good job, I liked it.