I liked it, some grammatical errors but i won't go mein fuhrer with grammar.
Also the epilogue could be expanded upon more but it still was sweet.

Oh, don't worry. I always make that sickened looking face when i see some of my old reviews(not the same as fics but the feeling is the same i think), also good to see you didn't forget this site, and i will re-read this tale now as i leave this review before starting the fic, i hope you didn't make Marche wear a party hat the entire story or something more creative hehe.

GREAT! This deserve a sequel! Really loved this guilt situation that you done with Marche Really well written story!

Darling, Ritz's hair is dyed pink. Not red. Luckily, this story is good enough for me to love you anyway.

Very well done, let me tell you right now. You brought out Marche's guilt perfectly, contrasting it to the true feelings of the others about returning to real Ivalice as opposed to staying in dream Ivalice.

I have a feeling that, perhaps, one of these days I'll write a FFTA fic of my own...you've given me that inspiration to do so. :-P

Some bastard stole your entire story.

I weep for you, kupo. Your story has fallen prey to a plagarist, and Vampire Slushie and I have done what we can to warn you.

Nanoko is the name of the criminal, and don't worry, she's been flamed already. Her story is Tears of Regret, just to let you know.

So, whatever, and we got your back, kupo.

*continues reading in a very interested manner*

:D Nice so far~

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How do you do it, kupo?

How do you write such a kick-ass fic like this, kupo?

Very well done.

Les Garcons Tristes...WOW. That's all I can really say. I have those types of story ideas, but I can never seem to make them sound right on microsoft. I tried reading it again with some music, awsome. Great job on the story, anyways. I think I'll go read your other stories right now, WITH MUSIC!

Brilliant, well written, etc. The best Final Fantasy Tactics Advance story I've ever read. Well done.

Good work. This was really a good story.

...interesting

Poor Marche (hugs chibi Marche doll) This was a great chapie! I hope you update again real soon! Please?

Yay! This is good so far! Please update it! Please?