aww, Christine got her angel! Good story, it's a shame I'm guessing you're not going to continue. Well, it's an amazing story with a lot of potential :)

~Era :)

Wonderful story so far! I simply love Erik as a vampire! It fits him perfectly! Nadir being a vampire too is awesome too! One question for you however. Please tell me honestly that this story will be an Erik and Christine story, please! Once again: Excellent Job! Please update as soon as possible! Thanks!

Vunderbar! You are geting so much better with your writing styles. _ And it was perfect that you submitted this today coz I just got dun with a VTM campaign (yes I am an RPG freak, fear me!)

So, yes, good! *thumbs up*

Just a warning to you - I suggest you change Erik de Lestat's name. Lestat is obviously a character from the Vampire Chronicles by Anne Rice, and you may not realise this but her works are banned from being written about in fan fiction. Your story will be taken down if find that you are using the name Lestat because they want to avoid law suits. Other than that, it's good.

O, creepy. I like creepy stories. (I give it 10 out of 10.) Udate soon.

-Jumps in the roof and starts screaming- AH! VAMPIRE ERIK! THAT'S WORDS BEYOND HOT AND SEXY! KEEP IT UP! HOTHOTHOT... -Drool-

psha, i am no longer Eek, i am PIP! well, at least right now in this review. Anyway, that was pretty good for having experenced the deaths of classmates. But what I reccomend is that you use your emotion to really get into the writing and into the story. Just some friendly writing tips

it's pretty good..I think. just keep writing, you'll do fine..

Yay..Finally one where Erik is a vampire..Update soon please :)

kool _

please continue!

Ahh! *squees* This phic has a LOT of potential. Like I said, I'm not into vampires and what not, but it's still interesting enough :P

-Andra/Tasha

*claps hands* Bravi!

o. A Hott vampire? couldn't get much better than this! Update soon!