I totally remember reading this years ago when i was first getting into reading fanfics! It's definitely in my top favorite stories of all time for FF. Re-reading again.

Looking through my very old favorites today. This is nostalgia in a nutshell. God.. 7 years xD

Really great story. Actually your a very good author. During the last page it felt like i was finishing Harry Potter. I wanted it to go on! Honestly freakin awesome! Please write more.

Years later and still one of my favorite fix
Makes me want to go back and replay it again

Good god, this is so great I could die. I can't stop reading. You write wonderfully!

AND NEVER BEFORE HAVE I WAITED NO TWENTY GODDAMN CHAPTERS FOR ONE KISS. You're wonderful, really. Fucking update!

It's been two years! Update the fucking thing!

ok im new. i want to hear more. hope to see some more soon

please update this dear D; Its leaving me hanging..

holy crap i dont see why u stopped this story. i want to finish it but at the same time i dont want it to end

ah I think I'm going to cry if you don't update soon... Do you have any desire to continue this story? I'm just curious, I think I'll seriously die if you don't!

please update...please!

update, why haven't you updated

Unlike quite a few people here, I haven't been reading your fanfiction for 3 years but finished it within the last 3 days, and I must say, I'm very impressed.

The characterisation was very well done and you forced me to look at the dictionary a couple of times. The build up of the relationship was gradual but not painfully slow which in turn made it realistic. Not many people these days like rejection; they just plough straight onto the next stage of the relationship. You did quite well on that.

I especially enjoyed reading the first four paragraphs of chapter 21. - Cid's cursing, the truck, Yuffie being a logophile etc are great underlayers of the story.

However, I'm beginning to lose some interest in the latest chapters and finding myself scanning, not reading. The new characters don't have the most interesting pasts in my opinion though they seem to be quite minor and temporary to this fanfiction as a whole. I'm not sure about the direction that you took after the scandal but I'm still looking forward to future chapters and hopefully there'll be the 'shoe gremlin' and reunions with other main FFVII characters.

There's also something slightly bugging me, though of course that's just my opinion and maybe I've been watching too much Dead Fantasy but I find the two girls a bit too... weak? Their strength doesn't seem very consistent. I know Tifa is considered 'rusty' and sedentary but they seem a bit too helpless in my opinion, as if they can't look after themselves unless Vincent, Cloud or any other stronger fighters need assist them.

I'm hoping that you'll update soon.

As I've had said before, this story is amazing! I won't rant on how great it is, my previous review having covered the sheer goodness of this story.

However, I do have a few concerns regarding the new direction that this story is seeming to take. Far be it from me to offer suggestions (an authors work is his/her own), but it seems to me that this story is focusing less and less on the relationship between T/Y, and more on an adventure-type story. In a way, I like it. But, at the same time, I hope that you will not disregard the more emotional side of this story.

Furthermore, this story might need a little (read: big) crisis, or multiple crises. I fear that the story may fall into the trap of becoming too stale - and more than that, the plot seems to be going nowhere (I could be wrong - an amazingly complex plot could just be around the corner).

Just my two cents.

I'll still read onwards and onwards - good stuff!