I am fucking ruined

It was a letdown that you killed off Kyle, but it was a really good story with everyone in character.

I came here to have a good time. I didn’t think even once that something like that was gonna happen. You made it a thousand times more painful when Gregory came back and was all like “bby I love u” and then Christophe was like “I accept.” Then you had freaking Kyle watching over all of this shit and then singing that last line. Like fuck you man that broke my heart. I am legitimately sobbing. You made a grown ass adult sob in their bed. Good job bud. Fucking Christ I hurt, you actual dick.

It's just wonderful. Thank you author!

Hello ! I like your fanfiction so far ! Can I just correct your french ?
"Oui madame, je parle français. T'es folle ? J'habite en France, pourquoi je ne parlerais pas français ? Pétasse..."
For "as-tu perdu l'esprit ?" I'm guessing that's come from "Have you lost your mind ?" but we don't really translate litteraly, it doesn't sound right. "T'es folle" means "you're crazy" but it fit more in the sentence.
and for "Please ? I'm sorry, my love" it would be "S'il te plaît ? Je suis désolé, mon amour"
Sorry for my english !

Okay... Just... The French parts are... ughh... I wouldn't even have understood them without the english translation xD

Ok, I really salute the effort of wanting to pay tribute to a foreign language by writing scenes in it, but usually you at least make sure what you post isn't a total massacre... Even if your French betas were away, you should at least have edited...

So if you want your french sentences translated for real, you can send them to me so I can re-write them for you ;)

Ok, your story is quite good in itself but sheesh... I am French, and I can tell you you got the french sentences really wrong... I don't blame you for that though, because our language is so fucking complicated (hell, even french people have a hard time with it!)... However, it made my eyes bleed a little.

So, correct translation of : Yes m'am, I speak French. Have you lost your mind? I lived in France why wouldn't I speak French? Bitch. Oui m'dame, je parle français. Vous avez perdu la boule ou quoi? J'ai vécu en France, pourquoi je n'parlerais pas français? Pétasse.
Your translation of 'bitch' was awesome. I laughed so hard at 'Pétasse.' xD So this is the correct sentence without any mistake, as a young French boy would say it. 'Avez-vous perdu l'esprit' is correct, but no one in real life actually say it like this xD

Please? I'm sorry my love S'il te plaît? Pardon, mon amour.
'Je suis désolé' is correct, but we usually say "pardon" 'cause it's faster. And we do not use "vous" when addressing to friends or a lover : "vous" is a mark of respect towards authority.

Moreover, we do eat crêpes, but quite scarcely : as a fancy snack or at Chandeleur time, but I've never seen anyone eat some for breakfast. We pretty much eat the same breakfast as Americans : cereal, hot chocolate and bread w/ jam or nutella. But scrambled eggs aren't our thing though.

Your story was cool, thanks! ;)

oh my gosh..let me just say, that this is literally my favorite Kystophe fanfiction of all time.

It was just amazing, every single part of it, the dialogue was great, the kystophe was great, and it made me laugh, go like "dfkndfjjk" and cry. I seriously cried legit tears at the end, and no kystophe fic has done that before. (or has done that since I read this).

It's just amazing, the greatest, sometimes I remember a funny line from this fic, or a kystophe moment (the whole fic's kystophe though omg) and i juST start smiling so darn much... I love this fic. you are just super amazing at writing kystophe and sp fics in general.

DARN YOU

YOU MADE ME CRY

OVER KYSTOPHE

IT'S MY OTP AND I RARELY CRY OVER FRICKING SP FICS

BUT FRICK MY HEART IS IN SHAMBLES

HONESTLY I THOUGHT CHRIS WAS GONNA DIE

BUT NOOOOO

MY HEART IS BROKEN, GOD BLESS THIS STORY.

OMG I'm crying!

Man I love this story. But it does make me cry. Still like it though.

This is the best story ever! I loved it! I'm sorry but I didn't like the ending after Kyle died... It's just to sad! Lol, I'm balling my eyes out right now.

Yo... This was deep. :' it made me cry. Like, wow! Please work on the creek, it's one of my favourite pairings. Really good, bro.

Ohhhh!
Your a gorillaz fan, hmm?
Instant respect!
I love the gorillaz.
And the pairing Tophelovski- that's what I've heard it been called...

This story is the first story I've ever read where I cried so much it affected my dreams. I consider this story, along with the pairing, sacred to me. something that insipres me to write and make things that can affect them how this did me.