| Reviews for Fragment of a Lost Poem |
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   CelicaChick chapter 4 . 10/21/2015 Great story! |
| Rachel Smith Cobleigh chapter 4 . 7/21/2014 I liked how you didn't force Inara to be anything less than herself to be with Mal. It would be a difficult sort of relationship, but it's very open-eyed and unflinching. I'm not sure I buy the idea of Mal being content with such an arrangement, but it's nice to see that someone has tackled it and has taken Inara's profession and identity seriously, not just sweeping it under the carpet. Good narrative structure, although the sex scene felt oddly rushed and not really set up well, but I liked Mal's line as he began it. Very nice job conveying the skin-crawling nature of the two agents, and a clever plot to shake them from the Tams' tail, at least for now. Nice reuse of the Lassiter. :) thanks for writing and sharing this story! |
| Rachel Smith Cobleigh chapter 2 . 7/19/2014 Fantastic chapter: nice plotting, nice buildup, good descriptions, and everyone feels very in-character. I particularly liked the description of her reaction to the two agents, heightened because of her observational skills and intuition. |
| Dudtheman chapter 4 . 7/16/2012 really great story thanks for the read ) |
| Gy chapter 2 . 1/23/2012 Holy crow, this is the greatest. That was the most well-written kiss ever |
| asthought chapter 4 . 6/23/2010 what a wonderfully well written fic! everyone in character the whole time and not a mary sue in sight! |
| rainsrabble chapter 4 . 3/19/2010 I really enjoyed this very beautiful story. |
| argentwolfwing chapter 4 . 8/5/2009 One word: HUZZAH! We all knew it was inevitable, right? |
| Summersurf chapter 3 . 5/12/2009 So nice to see Inara and Simon talking. |
| Summersurf chapter 2 . 5/12/2009 ah wow! I am so glad Mal kissed her! And intense to read how Inara reacts but really wants it! |
| Summersurf chapter 1 . 5/12/2009 Wow great chapter! Seeing Inara as a child, poor her! Being all alone, and being all alone on her new ship! And the ending that Mal is that boy! hahaha great! |
| Lattelady chapter 4 . 3/8/2008 That was too beautiful for words and it deserves so many words. I could see them and them...thank you for puting the pieces back together. |
| Summersurf chapter 4 . 2/26/2008 Great story! Beautifully written and very romantic! |
| brainfear chapter 4 . 9/19/2007 Aw, that was great. Very sweet. |
| espergirl04 chapter 4 . 8/11/2006 Loved this fic and for some reason I especially loved this line "Zoe and Mal had been through a lot together, but she'd never had to wipe away his tears before." I'm definitely going to have to read your other fics :D |
