A great story. Very good.

I'm happy to find a story with Cin Drallig in it, and it was a great story too. You are a very good writer. You might want to expand the fight and dialogue between Cin and Anakin at the end, though.

*sniffle*

I absoutly love this story, you did the best job ive ever seen on a one shot. I like the corrilation between anikin in the creche and the him killing the children. I also like the incorporation of drallig. I love stories like this one. Keep up the good work.

*Applauds* Bravo! I liked the irony of sending the Younglings into the Council chamber, where they were supposed to be unreachable. The contrast you made as well, between Anakin in the creche and Anakin killing the children, was realy tragic. Very, VERY good.

Wow... that was so sad... I have no words in me to describe how wonderfully sad that was.

It looks like you spent a lot of time and thought on this short fic. It's well written and descriptive, and it lets us in on the main character's thoughts and emotions in a way I will never achieve.

I thank you for writing this, for letting us into this world. This work is one of the finest I've seen on the site.

Very well done, all the best,

Nini, the Electrocuted Sheep.

You know, I've been looking for stories involving what was going on in the Temple just prior to and then during the siege...and I can't believe I missed this one!

Very few people realize Cin Drallig is Nick Gillard, the stunt coordinator for all three SW films. I only wished we saw more of his character, aside from the quick shot in the hologram Kenobi and Yoda watch.

Very eerie to see Anakin hold the baby like that, especially considering what he does sometime later.

Loved the inner workings of the Temple and masters. You definitely show how the war has changed everything, from younglings to masters alike...and how all hang on to hope that will be like it was before the war.

I'm currently writing a similar story with Drallig and other masters, but it's AU, so I'm not sure if you'd be interested in reading it? Just wondering...;-)

Again, brilliant story!

Impressive. Impressive, and beautifully written. This story sent chills creeping up the base of my spine and left the hairs on my arms erect.

ohh...this is very good. Kind of chilling, especialy the part w/ Anakin and the infants...and the ending was awesome, too. I love it.

Real depressing but in a good way. The insights on Anakin's reasoning was particularly cool.

It adds new light to episode 3. good story