This was great

You're storytelling is inconsistent. Why do you make harry so good at wandless magic and then COMPLETELY FORGET and make him useless when you need to make Malfoy relevant! You even said Harry does better at the spellsay wandlessly than Remus with a wand, sure maybe the 17 year old remus, BUT A 17 YEAR OLD REMUS WOULD HAVE STILL STOMPED DRACO MALFOY! Why do you constantly underpower Harry every time you give him an advantage? If I wanted to read about Harry being a useless twat I would just read the books again!

I'm super pissed that the Dursleys havent been killed yet for being useless twats.

This piece of writing kept drawing me in, I started reading it, and the next thing I knew, it was four in the morning, when I woke up I just kept reading. Thank you, this is a wonderful piece.

I enjoyed this immensely , thank you for the story!

LOVED IT! This was my second time reading it and it was great this time around too. :)

That was a lovely story. Thank you so much for sharing.

Why not try painting over the portrait of Mrs Black with paint?! Shouldn’t that work? LOL

JImS

good story not much of a harry/ginny fan but enjoyed it over the two days i read it

This was amazing!

Totally amazing.

Not bad, not bad at all.

good story

I love your story so far... keep up the good work.
If I'm not mistaken, Bobmin356 has passed away. Don't know if you knew or not.

This is just as wonderful the second time through as it was the first. Just one nitpick thing; you had Harry, as a fledgling, flash from the hospital to Albus' office, after you had previously said that he was incapable of doing anything in that newly burned state. Thanks once again for sharing this.