I absolutely love it! It’s so wonderful in its own twisted sort of way, and I can’t help but reread it over and over again

To be honest, I don’t ever seek out this pairing, but I clicked on it just because I was going through all of your other stuff and... wow.. it was intense, and gorgeously written. I would love to read an epilogue if you ever decide to write one.

After Lupin, I always find myself shipping her with Snape or Draco. I didnt honestly like the parte that pointed to a dark Snape capable of "taking" without consent. However, I realize you wrote this almost 10 years ago and this isnt even your style anymore! Also, I want you to know this was too cruel cuz Snape has no idea she feels something as well and anyways it is nowhere near his own feelings.
So... i will dare and try to give you a prompt you cant resist so you'll end up writing the epilogue. SO! Snape hidden and caring for a child that has been traumatized for some dark thing that happened to him. He needs help. So he LEts himself be found or he finds her. And Hermione gets to see a less cold, tender side of him, because it has been years since she saw him. And he is not the same. Just an idea for you, in case you can revive an old spark for a good story. A pleasure reading you, as alway.

Wow! This was so compelling and really left me wanting more. Sexy and sinister and psychologically complex... Also, your prose is gorgeous jus sayin

you know this fic is all about suppression of desire and heady want (and maybe unrequited love?) but I noticed how you never used one sexy/smutty word to describe anything. I think that's marvelous. Good work.

I like the way she says "dearest paper".

My brain has been utterly ruined. You are a delightful writer!

This is just amazing.
I love it.

I really hope you continue this and do an epilogue or sequel or whatever. It's a really good story but the hopeless romantic in me wants the HEA and is so not satisfied with the current ending. Pretty please continue!

Wow! This is an absolutely stunning piece of writting :)

I loved it! Shame about there not being an epilogue (hint hint nudge nudge) :)

It was effing amazing. So sick but so amazing.

Wow. It deviated from Nabokov's novel, thankfully, but it's for the best. Poor Severus with his love and desperation.. Everyone noticed except for Hermione!

Thank you for writing this. I had a lot of fun reading it, even with the uncomfortable moments while reading.

Reading the events from Hermione's point of view is creepy, because she has absolutely NO CLUE. That could mean that behind everyone's actions, there could be some underlying meaning no one will ever know... It's so creepy, and no I'm even more paranoid.

I had not expected this to be so difficult to read... It is strangely comfortable to read this; it brings back memories of reading Lolita a couple months ago. At the same time, it was extremely uncomfortable. You did a fantastic job in mimicking the desperate Humbert Humbert's voice. It was terribly awkward, but still.

And I'm off to read the other chapters...