I cannot believe that this only has one review! I loved it! I love how you started out with Daphne's POV and then switched to Niles'. My only suggestion would be to find a way to differentiate between the two. I found myself a little confused as I neared the bottom of the page, but then I finally figured it out. But I really loved this story!

Great job of describing what could have been going through their minds at that moment. I could picture it just that way and see the scene in my head. Great job.