The way you portray Ayame is awful. Fanfiction or not, she does not act like that. She also wouldn't be after Inuyasha. *shakes head* Another author who writes her like a stalker when she isn't.

LULLABYE BY: BILLY JOEL. THAT SONG IS BAE.

Inuyasha doesn't know about Rin?

That's a big twist...

I love twists! And twisters! Nah, just kidding about the twister thing...

I love the parts in the chapter about the film, those are really, really good and I always love reading them!

Please update soon:)! This is really really reaaaaaaaalllllly good!

please update...

plz update soon!

this is a cool story.

Hey, when you're switching scenes, could you maybe do a line or something? It gets confusing once in a while. Even just skipping an extra line would work.

oh my...

I LOVE it already!

hello, nice 1st chapter! this story is interesting so far :)

it says this story has not been updated since late 2006! wow! it's 2008 now! lol. well, i hope you are still planning on continuing this. I will keep reading later! I am sleepy lol -.-

我 認 的, 和 。 和 : 我 喜 歡 咖啡 貓。

I somewhat understand that line.

I something the story has good something and I am very happy you like it. Don't know the rest then something I like Garfield. :O

I am chinese, but I'm a failure at it. xD

love this story! update soon

please update soon!1

:-)

cute story!

): i see that you haven't updated over a year...:-) but i'll be waiting for your next update! (hopefully soon xD )

Pls Pls Pls! Update! I can't stand it, it's been a year since u've last updated. Pls don't stop this story!