Love it! So sad that death had to seprate them so quickly, but that's life and lfie doesn't always go like you planned...

While going through my favorites list, I came across this and reread it. My old review was extremely brief, and I thought you deserved to know the reasons why I love your story. :)

First of all, I love the fluidity of the piece, and the ease with which you spin in little details (“Upon further reflection, I consider myself somewhat fortunate, as images of my frail bedridden father spring to mind, begging me to put a stop to the chemo, begging me to steal some morphine, begging me to steal a gun.”) I love how you totally *nail* Jason’s character without even really trying (“I know during those moments he cursed his vast knowledge of medicine, of the human body, of how to kill someone quickly and efficiently. The knowledge which told him I was dead. I know he wanted to believe, if only for a moment, that there was a chance. But he couldn't. Treadstone had taken that from him as well.” Most of all, I love the way you perfectly capture Marie’s conflicted emotions without using too many words (“He kissed me and I saw the pain in his eyes, the destruction of his soul. He kissed me and I hated him.”)

Good luck with your writing.

Keep It Surreal,

-Death Merchant

This is exactly the kind of fic that I've been looking for in this 'verse. It's...well, it's not all fluffy and glazing over a lot of serious issues between Marie and Bourne and their situation and how she 'died.'

I love it and this was great.

Beautiful.

Poor Marie. And poor Jason.

wow! this is great can't wait to see more of your writing

I like it. It still pains me that they ended Marie and the Jason/Marie relationship as early as they did, and this is an interesting interpretation.

I rreally like your style of writing...I think you are a great author...please write more...and F.Y.I...I'm sort of leaning towards a relationship between Nicky and Jason since Marie died...rose for your awsomeness... -

I love your style. Very vivid, very powerful.

Beautiful. Brief and poignant. Very good!

Very powerful- I don't usually read Bourne fics but at this rate I may become addicted! This was wonderful. Thanks for sharing!

that was sad but so beaytiful

really well written.

it's written so real that you can totally feel and understand the emotions.

perfect.

"I just never truly believed it could end this way."

Sad! Good job writing from Marie's p.o.v., interesting to see how she reflects on life, her relationship w/ Jason and the day she died.

intriguing, thinking of the story in that regard. you have a forceful, straightforward style that i really admire. gets the point across nicely. good job; i'm looking forward to more from you.