So I just read all of this in one sitting, and I must say, I thoroughly enjoyed it. In my humble opinion, the first half of this story was...rough, to say the least. It went too fast and there were weird time skips. It was kind of a train wreck, but one I couldn't look away from, so I kept reading. I was disappointed with how you handled Riku, and with the 18th chapter, I'm still not sure if he was 'evil' or not.
But the last chapter was a huge leap in writing. Like, mediocre to nearly professional. I don't know if you put this story down and came back to it or what, but you gave this fic a great ending and smoothed out all of the questions I had. Great job!

ok nevermind. I was thinking kyo seemed different. like, 10x more douchebag-esque. Glad to know you're not trying to portray him as such.

OHMYDOG KYYOOOOOOOOOO! Thank you for putting Kyo Sohma in there.

omg so good u hav incredible writing skills.

This is probably one of most well-written and unique stories I have read! Thanks for the great read!

Awesome! Really interesting story you've got here. I especially liked the idea of Namine and Riku conspiring to change both Sora and Kairi's memories. I admit two of my favorite pairings are Kairiku and Kaidus, so I was rooting for both of them a bit, even though I knew the story was Sokai, lol. I like Sokai too, it's just I always seem to grow fond of the non-mainstream pairings. :)

Anyways, great story! Your writing has definitely improved a great deal! I loved the last few chapters, especially. Keep up the good work!

Take Care!

Zora

oh that was rlly good! :)

that was really one of the best stories i have ever read. it really made me sad but i loved it. i loved how you made someone who isn't really a baddy but turned them into a baddy, you did that really well. i luved the SoKai theme the whole way through it and the fact the Kairi went to a boys school, genius lol :) gd luck with fture stories :)

So is this the end? anyways, if it is...congratz...its a very good story :D! i liked the effect that was created during the story. 1st you say "ok so her brother died etc etc" but then you start figuring things out and say "ooooh...so it was that B***h Namine." [sry for the foul language ]...

Wow i had to rerread the whole story to remember it. well i knew things here and there but i needed to refresh it. that was cool the ending. if it id the ending i still like it.

Wow... i've been waiting for this fic to be updated for gosh... almost three years now? xD

This is brilliant, absolutly brilliant,

thanks so very much for the update !

3 Victoria

*cries* i think u should have osmeone threaten namine and make her give sora and kairi a happy ending

Its been like years!Aah.i need more...*whimpers*please...

Hey dude! Awesome story! You're a good writer. Can you please update soon? I'm exited for the next chapter. Again, awesome story. Bye!

NOEEZZ! Stupid cliffhangers! GAHH!

You must update ASAP. Seriously. That's the worst cliffhanger evar! It makes me want so much friggin' more!

Please hurrY!