I love this book! I wish that you might find it in your heart to write their wedding m? Pretty Please?

I’ve been waiting for Ron to give her the annulment to sign. It’s not done, please finish it!

Otherwise I enjoyed your story, thank you for writing it.

Wow I read most of your other one but famn this is good

Chapter 11: Yeah, a hell of a cliffhanger ! Couldn't wait for that kiss !

I still love this gem you wrote.

ugh Hermione.. you dumb bitch... STOP MARRYING PEOPLE YOU DO NOT LIKE!

more please

Let's hope he washed that had before running it through his hair, this chapter has to be the worst so far, not bothering with the rest.

So you suddenly have a plot hole, so you mentioned her parents, you've all ready killed off her father and never mentioned her mother (MUM), once not even during the wedding now you bring them up?

It's MUM not mom, they are British not American, they sound completely different.

Where's hermiones mum? You mentioned her dad died but no mention of her mum wired.

Nice

Honestly, I didn't like this story at all. There's not enough magic, Sirius would never be such a lovesick fool, and you've turned Hermione into a weak-willed idiot damsel in distress. You characterization was kind of awful. Also, Brenda is two dimensional at best. Finally, the trio graduated in 1997. Not in the 2000s. And I can't take a story seriously when you can't tell the difference between 'your' and 'you're'. Read it all, expecting it to get better. It didn't.

damn your infernal cliffhangers.

haha i was yelling at me laptop the first 18 chapters for hermione to just tell sirius that she loves him lol nice story, plenty of drama without it being too much :)