funny lol litteraly

The rhyming is elegant and not forced at all. Very beautiful poem.

Peace,

Yellow Moon

All I can say is bravo. This was beautifully scripted, descriptive while sharp and cutting like a two edged plade the ending line hurt:

"Marauder and murder

I have been called by both names

Marauder and murderer...

Funny how they sound the same."

That line just kind of made me twinge inside, this poem is very much Padfoot, blunt and to the point from the get go, while perfestly phrased...it was beautiful.

hm...I love it. I can't quite place my finger on why, but it must have something to do with the way you formed your words. ( that won't make sense to you, but ti makes perfect sense to me!)

Hey! It's me! I finally have an account! This is really good! I love the contrast between Marauders and Murderers who woulda thunk it? Well you obviously! But shakespear has nothing on you! Ha!

Mione

Wow, I love it! Its so sad... nice... I love Sirius... lol, great job!

this is good. that's so sad. poor sirius.

Great! Please R&R my stories back!

I love it. It's sad. And Padfoot being my favorite, I like all fanfics about him. And this was great. My favorite is the last stanza: "Marauder and murderer I have been called by both names Marauder and murderer… Funny how they sound the same"

very nice. at first i thought it was petigrew but at the end sirius. bit confused but great writing none the less. i love writing poetry. love it.

Jio Ki'en

Hey! this poem is outstanding! its really really really good. Its sad but i like it! Keep writing! oh and Speaking of rocks when are we going climbing hm?

Wow, that poem was powerful. Have I read it before? I don't think so. But it's so sad and beautiful and I felt tears in my eyes and poor poor Sirius and WHY'D SHE HAVE TO GO AND KILL HIM?

*sigh*

Yis I am the first reviewer, at least I think I am. To all weird people who read reviews before reading the story (to see if it's gotten good reviews) this is an EXCELLENT POEM. Quite sad *tear tear* and very well-written.

Those do sound the same. Very chizz to make a poem outta it. Very or-i-gi-nal

I like the word "labyrinth" that is one of my favorite words.

Well, this is added to my favorites list (whenever you come out with a new story/poem or something I add it because I love them all). More poems and stories soon, yes? *hopeful puppy face*

Long live the Buddha Bowl! Long live the Rock!

-Maethril Aranel

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