I freaking hate frigging Seiji.

That's probably a weird opening sentence... but that doesn't change the fact that he's an annoying brat! If my little sister is ever like that...

But Seiji IS helpful on setting the romantic mood. Slap Sakura some more so Chichiri would worry and hate you too! XD And let Chichiri find out about Sakura's family issues! That would be so cool!

Hehe, got distracted there... So anyways, this is so cute! I like their relationships! Though I think you're exhausting your ALL CAPS button with Tasuki and Kisa's yelling. xD

There's a few things I'm bothered with though... like I'm expecting Sakura to be more traumatized by the almost attempted rape. It's like nothing happened! And when Chichiri rescued her, it's like he didn't even care that Sakura's getting harassed in front of him. What, no revenge or anything? Make that bastard pay for what he did rather than leaving him unconscious!

Another thing I noticed is that you seem to be rushing things up a bit. Like, one minute they're doing that and the next second they're already over there. Sometimes, I can't keep up. And were they wearing kimonos for the festival all this time, or did they somehow change while they're there?

The girls' powers are weird... do you really have to give them a power? I mean, Miaka survived with only luck... but I guess it's necessary for the story but... it just doesn't set a realistic feel for me.. I mean, two girls from an ordinary world somehow get powers just from entering a book? Even Miaka doesn't have much luck with that!

And sometimes, the inner conversations they have with their inner voice sounds so weird...

But other than that, it's fine! Chichiri's my favorite character, so I'm really happy to see him get so mushy and romantic! :") He's so sweet! But very conflicted. Is he really gonna let the thought of Kouran hold him down from starting his life anew?

And doesn't Tasuki get sore throat from all that yelling? Tasuki's adorable, but there are really a lot of ALL CAPS going on...

Pleaae update soon! I really want to see more of this!

Please update soon! Really good, when will Chichiri and Sakura kiss!? They totally love each other :D

your Story is so cool! Can you tell me where i can read Storys
from fushigi yuugi in german
glg

iijan! how sweet! i am absolutely in love with this story! the romance between tasu-chan and kisa is really funny and sweet, and the romance between chiri-kun and sakura is really suspenseful and heart-racing! and one of the bad guys falling for sakura: nice twist! please keep writing! arigatou and sayonara! .

i personally found this story very interesting. great creativity. but chichiri and tasuki's thoughts tend to be about the same every chapter, with chichiri's 'inner voice' saying almost exactly the same stuff. i understand that chichiri's confuzed about his feelings and all, but i think that he's being a bit stubborn. he and sakura should get together soon

u did a great job with tasuki, but i must say, his thoughts (like chichiri's) are almost the same as well. but he is very interesting. he and kisa really do go well together

please please update! i wanna know why miaka went into the FY world again, and i REALLY wanna know how tasuki reacts to this, and if his relationship with kisa blossoms - i also would like to know if chichiri and sakura would get together, too! so PLEASE update! i'll be waiting

WOW! that was AWESOME! great job with the story - i think that sakura meant 'no explanation what so ever,' instead of 'no what so ever explanation.' but it was kinda funny XD u did a great job

I'm the 112 reviewer and I say: Update soon again okay? No, I more like DEMAND you to update! I love your story. It's nice that some think of the two last lonely Stars of Suzaku :DD

wha T-T What happened to Kisa and Tasuki?

I wonder what happened to Sakura... and confessing then yelling? -

Wow, I really like the story, and I hope you wokr on it again. SO now Mika's in the book world too, Poor Kisa

kawaii! such a cute story! check out my stories,pretty please?

I love your story! Is Miaka gonna ruin it for Tasuki and kisa? I hope not!

OMG I love your story, write more! PLEASE! ONEGAI SHIMASU! It's so cool, write more!

plz update! i love your story. i konw you probobly have alota things to do but even a small chappie would do...plz?O.O

PLEASE UPDATE! I luv this fic so much.