Awwwwwwwwww! Sweet stuff, mostly. Though the quarrelling between the pairs in the middle of the story felt stilted.
I love the story, especially this chapter.
From the moment Ellie first threw up, I thought Charlie might gain that extra bit of inheritance. Was surprised it took so long to be told!

i luvd it! but i crid so much! btw, did u hav 2 put 46 childrn?!

Totally awesome story. I really hated to come to the end of it. Have you ever considered doing a few one-shots of the married couples and their kids?

you know what? i was a bit confused on the last part..when you started telling the names of their children..you could have enumerated them first before telling what they did or something..uhm..but, i still like it so much..really...i swear!

wow! that's all i can say..it's the best! i love it! the story is so "realistic"..i mean..you know..it seems like it's the "real thing"!

as i was saying..i really love your stories..i still like your ideas..really! swear! i think that you'll become a really good writer or author someday..

nat,

wow. what can I say. You are a brilliant author. Your plots are interesting and funny, while there is also deeper qualities. The twist on Jo's novels that you have applied to your stories is amazing. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading both of your fanfictions, and I'm kind of sad that I finished reading them. lol If you can find time, could you please email me? my adress is Thank you for writing these stories.

Sincerely,

Alaine

OMG! I’ve just spent one and a half weeks or so (with schoolwork) reading this ABSOLUTELY AMAZING ficcie, and I must say, I’m pretty luck to have found, considering all the stuff’s that’s on fanfiction now….i was reading TGWL on mugglenet but then was directed to fanfic and realised that not only did you have the entire fic postup, you also had the entire fic of its sequel, and for the next few days after my little ‘discovery’ I was in paradise….reading your fic, that is….

So, let me introduce myself – I’m Charity Firewarden, I haven’t exactly been around for long, and what I do in my spare time on the net is look around for good fanfics that are worthwhile reading…such as yours…

Sorry that I haven’t been reviewing for every chapter (actually, I’ve haven’t reviewd at all for both fics) but I thought that since you had already finished writing both fics, my progressive thoughts wouldn’t be that worthwhile and useful for you, so I thought one big review at the end should do the trick…

So, I’ve got to hand it to you – you obviously have the talent, commitment and imagination required to write such massive stories… I am thoroughly amazed at your how you’ve persevered throught right until the very end of this story – and not once has the standard of your writing diminished throughout your ficcie…and also at the extent of your imagination and ability to mould these overly stereotyped (at least, in the fanfic world) characters into your own little story and world….i like how you didn’t revert to what pretty much a lot of HP fanfic writers turn to when out of inspiration….and I ESPECIALLY LOVE the way you’ve conjured your own little personality for yourself, who is such an important and major character in your story and who is connected to harry in such an intimate way…..simply amazing…

And I must say that I am very interested with your llittle idea to write a 10 chapter thingamabobysie and I will definitely read that….so I hope you’ve started writing that…

You’ve everything write – and that’s mainly evident because you didn’t lose my concentration or interest in the story at all while I was reading – so that’s a good sign I guess! You’re an excellent writer and I wait with great anticipation for your next chapter fic….

Good luck with your writing in the future and all the best!

Charity. XD

Hey

i really love all your stories!

please write a sequel!

i have now read all of your fics and realy enjoyed them. i even think that the way you wrote there sixth year was so much better than the way J.K.R wrote it. twards the end of the fic i started wishing that there was more to read. i can't wait to read your next one.

I have read both stories and have to agree that I am happy that you gave Harry a cousin (Ellie). Although could there have been a way around Professor Dumbledore dying? But I guess that if you mess with fire, (Voldermort), you get burnt...

Usually I would ask for a sequel/Continuation of the Story, However I feel it would not be needed. Though I had hoped that Harry would've become Minister for Magic as Trewlaney said in Harrys 5th Yr Divination Class (UK Version ch. 26 Seen and Unforeseen page no. 513.) I must also congratulate you on using an magical amimagi like a phoenix... Something which in where I found it best to have Harry and Ginny Phoenix Amimagi.

Excellant Story

Joshua Bygate

King of Vaypouria

All I can say is "WOW." I had been reading your stories on Mugglenet Fan Fiction, but I really wanted to read ahead. I loved they way Ellie turned into a Phoenix during the battle. I also thought that Ellie's explanation of why Harry's "Avada Kedavra" spell was white could have gone a little smoother. Do you think you could write all of the characters' children and e-mail it to me, because I am very confused!

Sincerly,

A very loyal fan!

in chapter 35 you mention Blaise Zabini but in chapter 36 you don't. why?. the ten chappie sounds brill

that was quite possibly the best thing ever. I must admit that you are really the worst at making me cry. The battle scene was killer. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, and will look forward to anything that you choose to write in the future! 10/10

Wow! I loved this too! It was great. You have a wonderful talent. And I wanna read the chpt ten thing you spoke of!