Oh my gosh...I’m NOT an emotional person and rarely cry about anything, but this had me bawling. It was beautifully written in the most heartbreaking way.

OMG, so emotional. I was leaking tears, the way little Harry reacted and Petunia's goodbye..it got me.

I've been looking for a James survives story. Looking forward to reading this.

I really enjoyed this story! It was cute, but had a plot line and some intense chapters. I also loved that you had the Marauders get back together in the end! A lot of stories like this one don’t do that and instead just hate on Peter. I really like how you put a forgiving spin on it and gave Peter a second chance!

But what the hell happened to Lucius? You can’t have him escape, have no resolution and then no sequel. So unsatisfying. Love the rest of the characters though. Harry was a little cutie

I know you wrote this story 11 years ago and I’m not even sure if you still visit this site, but I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story! It made me cry and laugh, I think you did an excellent job at portraying the characters! I also appreciate that you redeemed Peter. Most authors leave him to rot and I really appreciate that you have him a second chance!

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That line from Sirius was his finest moment in the DoM battle in OotP. Woo hoo! Perfect timing! And the immortal punch!

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY

The last straw was Harry's little "Ma". And now I'm crying. I hope your happy.

found of him was a finger…"
no no no nO. PETER CAN'T LIVE. DON'T LET HIM, NEUROTICA!

You're evil, Neurotica! ;-;
I'm bawling. How could you do this.

...Pfft no, I did not just shed several years back there... Pffffft...

Great story!
Well, there's another thing making your story unique: I haven't read any stories where Wormtail ends up with the Marauders again. Most authors aren't so forgiving. It's a beautiful tribute to friendship and forgivness. If you saw the review I made yesterday about Wormtail, you know how much I hate this character. Your story, however, gave a new insight about what could have been. Wormtail is neither a brave war hero, nor the last scum. There's an evolution of the characters' view of him. This is really good. Woumd you have told me 4 chapters before that it's gonna end this way, I would have laughed. But the way you wrote it; it seems totally believeable. No, the remaining Marauders didn't forget everything overnight, so this is still realistic.

Ouf! I'm so relieved! You know, I read a lot of story where Harry went missing and I can say that very few have had this effect on me! In most of the ff, Harry is found badly injured or something like that. I like to read this stories because of the angst, suspense and finally some fluffy scenes. But most of the time they're written in Harry's POV. Maybe there are some scenes about people looing for him; but it would still be centered around Harry before, during and after te abduction. And this makes your story so special. In the last 16 chapters we followed the charachters around, mainly James. With all the drama, we built a connection to this version of James, which made the abduction even more stressfull. We know James, we know what he's been through and how he felt about it, and this made the whole abduction episode simply perfect because I felt soo scared and emmotionaly attached to James!
Great job!