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  susan marson chapter 15 . 6/6/2014 16 ch was awesome but i almost screamed that no update was made... |
| ginnypotterfan1 chapter 3 . 11/30/2007 Hey, I LOVE AOD and this is a really good fic. BTW the grey gas is actually steam :) |
 KittenKez chapter 16 . 11/13/2007 Wow. Great I love this story can't wait for the update. This is one of the only stories that actually goes into Lara being in jail and all this so it's realy good D Like i said UPDATE SOON! plz. ~*K*~ |
| Dani chapter 16 . 10/22/2007 JANICE AND KURTIS? My god, this is where imagination has recahed it's limit. O.o Eesh Star. Awesome chapter but KURTIS AND JANICE? |
| GoopyCarbonara chapter 14 . 7/16/2007 No! Star, it isn't fair! I want moore! }:( UPDATE, WOMAN! :P P.S I don't think there's such a word as tiredness, try exhaustion. (Just some advice, I could be wrong... exhaustion sounds more formal though. XD) |
| GoopyCarbonara chapter 13 . 4/20/2007 Kurtis is a whole ton of man to take up being a lawyer suddenly, just for Lara... XD I love it star, please keep writing! I love it I love it I love it I love it! |
| Nienna Tasartir chapter 13 . 12/1/2006 Ah!, What an interesting ending! Very original! I've also like the fact that Lara accepts that she was suffering depression before Paris, it's gives the character a 'human side'. Keep going! |
| 13BlacKAnGELs chapter 13 . 11/1/2006 hmm...someohw i cnt imagine kurtis as a lawyer, as funy as it is! its definitely...different, wich is gud...i reali thort u wer jst gna leav her 2 rot there! so yay, go kurtis! lolx |
| 13BlacKAnGELs chapter 12 . 8/18/2006 wow. i mean...wow! you've written this so well! and this is such a brilliant plot! god-you don't find a lot of unique stories like this |
| Nienna Tasartir chapter 12 . 7/12/2006 Your story is getting more and more interesting. I have found really imaginative how you have managed to imprison Lara. I hope you write more soon! |
| Fallon M-mm chapter 12 . 7/8/2006 WOW! Big surprise! Hmm...Lara behind bars. That's kind of an oxymoron. But I love the writing! The characters are all cool! I'll be back when you've updated! |
| akkon chapter 12 . 7/5/2006 I'll hit you with... *looks around* my "Ernst's Wörterbuch der Industriellen Technik, Band 1". It's awfully heavy, so it should do the job... Cool chappie! |
| Revir chapter 12 . 7/5/2006 Now that's a long list (heheheheh), but if you update soon enough, maybe, just maybe, you'll make it out unscratched, ;P. I liked it, i supose it wouldn't be easy proving her innocence with all those circumstantional evidence against her. I just hope Kurtis finds something, something in the "non letal" category... That cop, though... there's something off... i don't trust him... Great fic, want more! Update soon, :). See ya. |
| Revir chapter 11 . 7/1/2006 I liked it! Great acting from Lara, ;P. Hmm, so they kissed huh, nice, :P, it was about bloody time. Great stuff, :D! |
| AKKON chapter 11 . 6/14/2006 Have them go to an Evanescence concert at the end is a nice detail. Though I've never been to a concert where you could actually book seats! But then, never been to see E. either, so... LOL Chapter's cool. I like that Kurtis acts so caring towards Lara. And her name is cleared at last (or almost) NFI, just a tiny, tiny objection: I think it would be better if you avoided using words like 'hazel orbs' or 'azure'. I admit they're kind of poetic, but IMHO, they tend to sound old-fashioned, sort of. But sure, this is only my view, and you may feel different about it, so don't feel offended! Anyway, liked the chapter. sorry it took me some time to review, but Akkon's been busy, busy... CU in the next one! |
