ROFL the ending got me there. Sly, sly Heero.

This made me laugh and love Heero very much. Well written, good job. My favorite line had to be "But I like your hair. It suits you perfectly." Because it so does. Lol.

~Staryday~

nice one! hahaha the mcnaught novel was "once and always" by the way. hahaha i thought i recognized the line! hahaha

Hahahah! I was suspicious of Heero's phrasing!

I love how you had Heero to act. Please write more like this. I love it.

That was so cute!

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Aw, that was so sweet! I was sulking when Heero seemed to forget about "last night"... but loved what you did at the end!

Cute story.

'Well he wasn’t in the least intimidated by Heero’s superiority complex but such things as intimacy weren’t that of a suitable topic for him. He’d rather stare at Quatre and Trowa do all the mushy-gooey stuff most couples do.'

I loved that one! This is one of the best 'first kiss, work things out' fics I've read about those two lads. It reads fresh and true.

Cheers

LH

OMG! this is probably the first and ONLY GW fic that's made me smile at the end! ery cleverly done! at first i thought it was gonna be just like all the 1 shots where they go "i love you! no i love YOU! kiss kiss. end."

But NO! you topped ALL that with the last scene! far out that was funny! GOOD job girl! i LOVED it!

Aww, that was GREAT! Utterly fantastic! "Beautiful"!

This was okay. The grammer was a little off, and you wrote that Duo lied at one point, but Duo never lies. Might want to fix that. I liked the story idea though.

This was a good story! I loved it XD!

that was cute! you should write more!

I loved the story! Awesome writing style too.