So sweet even from Ranma. All your writings have some unique taste makes me willing to read your stories, good job and keep with hard work.

I've read all of your stories. I just want you to know that they made me smile :) I was 14 when you published this story and I read it around that time too. 8 years later, this still managed to make my stomach do a back flip xD thank you for all the wonderful RA stories. I'm not sure if you still like this pairing, but if you still do, it would be nice if you could write another one shot.

It was excellent. Very.

Oh my god that was sooooo cute. I donT think Akane was THAT OOC actually. Really sweet. I loved this oneshot.

No, they weren't too OOC. I think you kept them greatly in character, making them break off only when it made sense. You're right, a different environment makes you act a little differently. And being in a strange situation makes you do strange things. Well done!

Hi! You made an adorable one-shot that, to me, is not as OOC as it probably looks to other people. I mean, if Akane is actually working, she would've used her "employee" mask instead of going insane over Ranma trying to get something for another girl. Then afterwards she could cry alone and avoid people seeing her vulnerable side. It was very well written, I hope I can read more from you later on.

Wow. Need I say more? Wonderfully done. The OOC was not way off tangent, and in all truth, seeing this side of Akane was refreshing since in most she is way mallet gung-ho. Great job.

~DipuC

Neato story

I love this fic! Akane is a little OOC, like you say in the AN, but she was trying not to be disruptive in the store so if another customer came in she wouldn't get in trouble. It makes sense to me.

I like how you portrayed her thoughts on Ranma and the other fiancees, though - a lot of people seem to think that she's angry over the other girls or has already picked one that she "knows" Ranma loves, but I like your idea best - just waiting to see where his heart leads him without trying to jump to conclusions.

I liked how you left out what was actually written on the note until the very end. It made the phrase mean so much more. Speakng of which, I adored the ending - not being able to look each other in the eye was a great touch.

Very cute. I liked it.

I loved your story. Very cute idea. Great job. C:

The characters seemed a little too OOC, both Ranma and Akane, but fluffyness was still seriously evident and was cute :D

Oh! i just had to review this! Normally i don't review for oneshots, (bad kiwi!) but this one was so... cute and sweet and innocent and simple and ... just perfect! I loved it! great job, i hope i can read more form you later. TTFN... ;) :)

this was really sweet...great job!

I love this one-shot! It is so cute! great Job, and keep it up~

~Kohana