Wow! this story was so good it actually blew the power in my house... well maybe not but the power did go out as I was about to press review.

I love this story and especially the author's note at the end... I was actually expecting that to happen in the story. Or have Max go to grab logan and the cliff collapse.

You did an amazing job.

Wow! Good story! A little convenient, how everything worked out so well so easy, but good. Loved the dialogue.

This is wonderful! Thank you so much for sharing - we love to see new writers getting into the spirit!

I loved Max's comment about not failing on missions. "It's not in the programming." I can just see her soldierly deadpan look as she says this. That her mission is Logan makes me soooo happy.

That was your first DA fic? WOW! Great work! I really enjoyed it! Keep it comming! :) -LadyCallie

lol cute-keep it up and post a sequel!

That was cool! I hope you keep writing!

hehehe! Your funny! Good fic.

not bad for a first fic! really good actually...i know how hard a first one is...CUZ IM STRUGGLING THROUGH MY B!TCHY ONE RIGHT NOW! heehee...anywayz...that woulda been kinda funny if she did fall off a cliff lol

lol

This is good! i liked it :)

Very Nice. Any chance for a follow-up?

This is really good Kimmie! It's well written and so shippery! Yay! :)

HI! Guess what? IM COOL! No really, cool story, I'll have to read it more better next time. The parents were to distracting. Anyways, I love the authors note. I got a real kick out of it. Also the ' slap' part. I thought back to last night. Talk to ya'll later! Write more fics too! About Star Wars maybe? hehe... I dont know...