| Reviews for Lunchtime |
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   Morizono Kat chapter 1 . 6/11/2017 wow wow wow that's a great fic |
| jj chapter 1 . 8/8/2015 omg that was to cute |
| Kariko Emma chapter 1 . 6/2/2014 Beautiful fic. I especially loved the last line... :) Great work! -Caliko |
| LonelyDreamer7 chapter 1 . 2/13/2012 Ahaha, Kakashi and his hunger strikes! Rin is so sweet to her boys xD |
| max.tmy chapter 1 . 9/10/2011 very sweet. i like the little details that make this fic more interesting and the vague humor while explaining Rin's decision. good work :) Max. |
| nipnag chapter 1 . 6/19/2011 love this! some team yondaime love! :D |
| HistoryHound chapter 1 . 6/18/2011 Aw, that was sweet. I really think you've mastered Rin's personality. I've seen fics where she has been described with a Sakura bipolar personality (which is all wrong), and I'm really happy to see that you stuck to what the canon showed us. The ending was so cute about Kakashi and the napkins. Someone was hungry. lol. |
| The Leaf 180 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011 Ahahah Rin-chans a hero! |
| Mute Wordsmith chapter 1 . 6/13/2010 I like how you describe the bentos at the beginning, and how it sort of fits each character. And then I like how the mission turns out to be... well, an unpleasant mission but suddenly it is made okay because there's good food! And the humour and interaction between the characters at the end is funny. XD "Life is full of danger. It is not, however, full of good food. Enjoy it while you can." - best line ever XD |
| fiesa chapter 1 . 4/14/2010 There arent enough good Team Yondaime fics in the world - or maybe I just havent found them yet - but yours definitively are absolutely awesome! Rin is a good girl, and I know why she would care about her teammates like that. Its nice to see them taking a break after being on duty the whole morning... Actually I thought Kakashi meant to ask if Rins food was safe - I agree with Obito, that would be a bit mean, even for Kakashi - but he meant his surroundings, so... And Yondaimes statement is absolutely true, of course A really, really nice fic. |
| Chibi Tenshi Sama chapter 1 . 5/21/2009 Aw. Sweet. Keep up the good work! ~Angel |
| anbumoo chapter 1 . 8/24/2008 This was so cute. O_O I loved the ending. Kakashi needs napkins. XD Excellent job; I love your style! :D |
| Convexbaka chapter 1 . 2/16/2008 That was so sweet! It reminds me of how I used to feed my best friend all the time until he decided to stop accepting food from me constantly :( (perchance I should have brought him stuff besides ethnic food and baked sweets). And Kashi's face? Does Rin see it? |
| Miss Emi chapter 1 . 9/3/2007 Aww... it was so sweet. :) |
| nacno chapter 1 . 8/24/2007 Cool |
