Reviews for Single Ninja on the Town |
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SkullVenom chapter 7 . 4/1/2019 amazing story |
Guest chapter 7 . 9/6/2018 Great story. |
noloyolo chapter 7 . 9/10/2016 Great fic! Still waiting for a sequel ! |
aminblastbro chapter 7 . 7/1/2016 Funny |
sakura.haruno.1010 chapter 7 . 5/25/2016 This was such a great fanfic :D i really enjoyed it |
sakura.haruno.1010 chapter 1 . 5/25/2016 Oh an interesting start :D |
Guest chapter 7 . 5/23/2016 update |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2016 Lesson from a sannin that never menage to go on a date with tsunade |
la canelle chapter 7 . 12/14/2015 I have really enjoyed reading this! |
Refraction of Light chapter 7 . 11/24/2014 Hilarious. Although you don't write anymore I still want to say awesome story I wish that you'd write the sequel but that looks kind of bleak. |
DUH BOMB chapter 7 . 11/18/2014 10/10 so funny and great |
John Smith chapter 7 . 9/20/2014 Hahaha, what an absolutely adorable story! I really enjoyed the read overall and LOVED the way you built up this last chapter. Talk about artful writing. That was a great use of literary devices. I'm so in love with how in-character everyone felt here. You took some liberties with Tenten and Temari, but they don't really have enough definition in the source material, so I can see how that was actually necessary. You've also got a VERY creative writing style that lends itself so well to a cute story like this. The narrator's quips are delightfully witty. Great job overall. I'm glad for the epilogue; it's nice to see them start moving (back) toward romance, if even a little. I was also glad to see things work so poorly at the climax. Not because I'm mean! but because I think you set up a great story that allowed us to end on a note that feels fairly familiar and normal as per the canon material. It's not EXACTLY like canon anymore since Naruto did pull some game-changing debonair moves, but that's the mark of good writing as well. Things changed in a fun and appropriate way, but I'm glad they didn't change too much. Great job overall, and thanks for such a fun and well written fanfiction! |
Anomyous chapter 7 . 7/10/2014 OMG... she branded him lol |
giodan chapter 7 . 9/1/2013 ahahahahah! poor naruto... |
crimsontears82684 chapter 7 . 7/21/2013 Overall, the story was good. I really liked the handbook concept. The pacing and formatting were a little off in some places but the story was still good. |