This was genius. Writing all of this from a nine-year-old's POV, with all the inherent inaccuracies and silliness thereof (the character's names! the chicken pox! the ridiculous pregnancy! everyone's reactions! plus Aunt Elizabeth's, ah, editorial contributions) - this is amazing, truly, and I can really imagine this sort of thing happening. Thank you for all the laughs - this made my day, and it will be sure to cheer me up any time I'm feeling down in the future. And well, if you ever feel like writing more of this, I'd love to see it!

DELICIOUS!

Haha, this story was cute. I squeak-snort-laughed at the whole dodecahedron babies and the infinite crying and pooping. XD

that was hysterical!

I laugh my head off reading this ...

Hilarious :-)

Ciao!

OMG, that was HYSTERICAL! I nearly fell off my chair with the Travis and Malcolm "development" at the end. From now on whenever I need a laugh, I'll pull up this story. LOL!

LOL! Egburtina?

Does that mean there are no more stories from little Sean? Please let there be more! I really liked them.

Hi!Just wanted to tell you that your story is really to read more!Please continue!

i do not get the names please update sooni would like to read more.

Aw! Too cute!

Congrats on a job well done!

Oh my God! You had me laughing so hard my abs hurt. "Your eyes are the colour of pennies picked up from the dirt..." and Trip's reaction "That was beautiful" had me crying.

You've hit the nail on the head with the mind of a 9-year-old. They really do think pregnancy is a one day thing and the whole bio-bed falling through all the levels is so what a 9-year-old boy would think.

I can't wait for more! Hurry, Hurry! SOON! Tell Sean to start writing! ;-)

Hoo Boy! I can't stop laughing! My son thinks I'm crazy. eep it up! Funniest ST story I've read so far, and I've read alot.

A very good epic it was...I hope to read more of your work in the future, too bad this wasn't TBC!