Poor Kagome. All of them so means hurtfull to her. Even Victoria is ass

Extremely redundant by this point lmao but I still feel the need to point out that children don’t ride “shot gun” at rin’s age. They have to use a car seat until they are big enough to safely use a seat belt (typically 8-10 years old)

I'm sorry, but after 46 chapters I feel it's necessary to inform guy that you seem to be regularly (almost every chapter) switching "him" for "her" and curse versa. It happens QUITE often throughout your writings and, if it weren't for the fact that I now expect to have to re- interpret your writings in such a way, it would be very confusing.

Even at 16 yrs old, it's a crime to not know the difference between "are" and "our." Genuinely. This was no typo. It's unnerving.

Welp from the reviews looks like I won’t like this story so

This takes the cake.. He's DRUGGING her now? So emotional, mental, and physical abuse aren't enough for your Sesshomaru. He has to resort to rape as well. I don't think there's any way you can end this with them together (and any sense of realism). Truly, this story is disgusting. Sesshomaru has no redeeming qualities at all. Inuyasha doesn't either. I can't help but hope that before he can rape Kagome, he notices he has some sores that match the ones he had to have noticed on Mei Lin. The Romance tag is extremely misleading.

You are so mean to Kagome and you don't care for her feelings

Kagome and Sesshomaru are so childish so far I'm really not liking their personalities

Actually its the worst story I've ever read and I just wanted something with Angst but this was plain idiotic story. Kagome had no backbone, Sesshomaru had no pride and honor, Inuyasha was dumb and Kouga was totally brain damaged. So everybody was ooc and the overall plot was nothing. I even found Rin irritating, such a shame.

I quit reading because this story was getting ridiculous. Sesshy was a complete SOBitch, Kaggy was a plain stupid beyond belief and no bone weakling. First 15 chapters was really good but then it turned out worse. Sorry ...

Dang, Sesshy was a big jackass in this story. Why Kaggy must stuck with him when he was free to do anything he wanted?

Lord of the Rings. And Wolverine.

Being a 22 year old virgin isn't weird. I've known plenty of people that were virgins until that age and older and it wasn't because of any religious zeal. And Inuyasha is a disgusting idiot, especially considering he thinks Sesshomaru has changed at all with Rin around.

Shaw... nibbles... Another story with Sesshomaru as an abusive asshole and Kagome a doormat. He's particularly vile in this story considering he wanted to know Rin but is more invested in getting his dick wet and being a beast to Kagome with no provocation. Inuyasha is nasty too.. going after a knocked up woman because it means she has experience? Interesting logic.

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HIJO DE PUTA! SESSHOMARU HIJO DE!