What an unusual story. But overall nicely done. The first two sets of spirits, though ... did you eat some bad nacos while writing?

This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

i love this story! absolutely genious! you took an old cartoon and really made it your own! the singing, the Broken Hearted (the gay spirits creeped me out a little) but still i loved it! so happy that they finally realized the love for one another (and the fight was awesome too) nice work

-Kaityn

great story, i enjoyed it, excellent

OH my God THis it THE story of kp! this is so wonderfully written... i wanna cry...

Aw... i loved this story! all the bad times almost made me cry. and the part about kim killing brick was disgusting. but it was a great ending to a great story!

That was really good! I really loved this last chapter. I've read other "A Christmas Carol" parodies, but never one that spoke to me like this. Also, the Valentine's day spin made more sence for Ron and Kim that a Christmas one would. I especially liked that, in the future, it was Kim who died, because I really think that would effect Ron more than his own death ever could. I really want to congradulate you on a job well done! I look forward to the next story you write!

Nice job on this chapter keep up the excllent work update soon please and thank-you.

Wow, this story is great! I mean wow; you made the future of Kim quite dark but I like it. I really want to see what's going to happen in the next chaps. Keep on working!

Love the story. And it's an interesting plot too. While you may have taken it form A Christmas Carol (as you said), you applied it to a different holiday and ended up breathing a lot of originality into it. This is really good stuff.

This was an awsome chater keep up the great work can't wait to see what happens next up date soon please and thank-you

Loved this chapter the story seems to get better and better with each chapter so keep up the good work and up date soon please and thank-you.

Man you've grabed my attention on this story it was awsome form beginning to end can't wait to see what happens next up date soon please and thank you.

seems to be very promising so far! you got a great plotline and writing style. keep up the good work!