Nice references to HP. It was a touch additional touch.

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Yay for Fred and George

Well, that was interesting. I enjoyed the Amelia Zel moments.

He's here! He's here! YAY! I've waited so long for Zel to show up!

Well that was interesting. So, who broke in?

Oh, come on! How could you deny me the righteousness of Amelia's words? CRUEL! I cry, Cruel! Anyways, action packed and fun. Good chapter... now to go and imagine a justice speech to end all!

Dundundun! This is getting good. But please don't let Filia go through that whole "Oh poor me" stealing the spot light routine, it's droll.

This was both boring and interesting. Seeing Zel and Xellos together, YAY! But the other's, boring. Okay, onto the the next chapter!

I must say this chapter is boring! Oh well, they can't all be winners. A boring chapter every now and then is expected, I even write them. The humor here and there did help, and of course my favorite monster's appearance never hurts Hopefully more happens in the next chapter, which I'm going to read now.

Well the scene with Lina going through her flash back was astounding! And Gourry's way of bringing her back was fun to

I much prefer how you're doing things so far compared to Try. Filia has not part in being Lina's comforter, especially considering she WAS the one who delivered that letter. Good job.

I already like this version more. Less Phillia. Though I don't doubt she'll be back. Oh well.

So, they're a couple? Um, I'm pretty sure no matter the circumstance if my boyfriend looked a woman's skirt, I'd kill him. I'd kill him if he did that to me!

Beyond that, great third chapter.

So... I'm confused. I thought you said that you stopped writing "Laws of the Land" because it started to tie into this one? Wouldn't that mean Lina and Gourry should be married already?... AH! I don't get it!

Anyways, I do like it so far (though I have no idea who those two people are) and I can't wait to Zelgadis. He is going to be in this one right?