You have just succeeded in capturing the true voice of Severus Snape. Well done. *slow clap* As a person who knows quite a bit about our favorite (or not so favorite) Potion's Master, I'd say you have reached perfection in this little snapshot of what might have been.

You know, I can't even give this the eloquent review and feedback it deserves. Absolutely wonderful. thanks for sharing it with us. x

oh. my. ghod.

This is just so perfect. So...snape.

Wow. You know what really gets me about stories like this? They have so few reviews. This deserves about 700.

How did you get so much power and snapeyness into something so short?

i liked this quite a lot. except, snape wasn't actually there when sirius fell through the veil was he?

This one illicits all sorts of reactions, from humour to exasperation to a bit of anger. Nicely done.

Snape probably would say something like that, but I think he would think on that last question quite a long time...

Extremely in character. Spooky, but in a good way. Powerful.

Excellent take on Snape's reaction to Black's death. One quibble; he didn't actually see him fall as he wasn't there. Maybe you could make that clearer eg "In Potter's memories I saw him fall" or "In my mind's ee, I see him fall."

Liked this. Nice job.

Perfect.