Excuse my rambling on a story that started 12 years ago and finished 3 year so. I just have a lot of thoughts and I need to let the out lol. The story kinda fell apart with the introduction of Kida. You needed a villain but she was really a mess. I liked a lot of the plot and storytelling elements in the beginning but things really do go off the rails with Kida. She's somehow Raven's cousin from Azarath even though Raven's mother was technically from Earth who was taken in by the monks of Azarath after being raped and impregnated by Trigon. None of that is mentioned in the show (for obvious reasons) so I understand playing around with the elements. She's not only Raven's cousin, she's Bruce's former lover that he cheats on his fiancee with even though she a villain. It's also really creepy and beyond inappropriate that Bruce started an affair with his foster child/ward. So Kida is Raven's cousin, Bruce's ward/lover, and somehow also an enemy of Nightwing (who mysteriously ended up in the past). The ties are just so loose. Maybe one of these things would have been fine but you spent far too long building up this villain that was difficult to care about. Adding Starfire and Aqualad behaving in a childish, petty, and jealous manner didn't help the story. All of this together just seemed like a distraction from the plot. The real sell of this story is Robin and Raven acting like parents, but with the addition of Kida and the relationship drama, the reader never sees any of that. I remember reading this story way back when and I don't believe I ever finished it so I decided to read it all in one sitting. There are things that I do like about this story though. I don't want to focus too much on the negative. The Robrae interaction is so good. Robrae parenting is adorable. I love the way they show their concern about Raiden. It was perfect in that aspect. I just wish there was more of that than what we got in the end. Overrall it was a fine story that I enjoyed reading. Thanks for writing this and taking the time to complete it.

Very nici (n.n)

Please,we want a sequel to this

If you are still around just wanted to say this was awesome. Very in depth and shows you had really taken the time to develop some of the back characters. Would really love to read a story of the in between of the last chapter and epilogue. Where it shows Robin coping with the memories and him trying to court raven. Would be awesome, but thanks for the read!

Good

It started out real good and then it went to shizview. Like what. I read the entire thing, but by this chapter 17. It failed, completely.

Just finished chapter one.. I can tell this is going to be good!

Im really loving it

In the beginning this Fanfic was unbelievably good but the love triangles really threw me off and in my opinion the ending was kind of cheesy. Overall the story could use some work but awesome Fanfic! Your an amazing author in the making.

The ending for chapter 24 was extremely disturbing and weird I am not very happy about it. I do not like seeing bad endings for such good stories, though I know some people do the actions Bruce and Kida were doing. I do not want any more inappropriate endings to this story... but otherwise I'm okay with it.

Please do not dillydally with this, and do add more drama! PLEASE add more action too... otherwise it's GREAT, and keep it up!

NOTE: I am very impatient about Robin coming back from tokyo, so if ur not done with it, plz finish! I am not very patient with stories, sorry.

:)

You screwed up the story with all the different angles you threw in the last few chapters. It's too dark and confusing. I'm forcing myself to continue to finish it.

I'm crying your TRULY gifted keep writing
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Is this Damian?

I've been with you sense the beginning of this wild adventure. I love your story so much and thank you for finishing it.