Oh! I like this story. I like the way you've spun the repeating and usually positive phrase, into a menacing, haunting mantra. It almost gave me chills a little bit.

Wow, really awesome piece of writing here. Then end just really hit hard. I can't even describe it, I just sat back and was, like, "Whoa . . ." xD

Anyways, fantastic :)

Brilliant introspective piece. Just perfect, the way you set it up. So simple and true. And sad.

Loved it!

Sapphireswimming

I like this, especially the idea of Edward being 'So. Fucking. Scared.'. It's well written, just the right length, and it really 'hits' you at the end, just like a short story should.

Oh I really liked this one! I like how you ended it. Great Job.

-Spark

*applauds* Very nicely written, and I think it captures Edward's point of view quite accurately.

O...Good. Very nice. You don't see this side of Ed's mind covered this well very often. Good ficlette!

wow! all i can say is wow! it really made sense! this was great...i liked how you kept repeating,"you get used to it." b/c it really showed the mood and main idea. i also liked the ending! :D

Excellent! -

I love this so so much. The rhythm in it is awesome and you potray Ed's feelings about adjusting to everything so well. It's so like him to feel like he's giving up for getting used to his automail limbs.

This was a great one shot. _ Good job!

Very nice piece. Excellent introspection into Ed's situation. Going on my favorites list! Keep writing!